A nice end to the series. I wonder why Harry didn’t teach Defense, but I like how you wrapped things up.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Jul 2018 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I don't get it, Lily wanted to test Inner Desire, so what? She wanted to know what she desired most at heart?
Great work, though, loved the trilogy
| Title: Chapter 1
| 29 Mar 2010 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Great alternate universe and good story! Harry and Hermione are really the best pair!
I love this series, sev as a grandpapa is one of my favorite things to read.
Lovely little story. Even so I didn't get the part with the changed potions. What was the meaning of them? Sorry that I didn't get it. Got my vote in the poll!
I'm glad that Severus now has a family to go to during the holidays and that he has finally unbent enough to show them that he cares about them and can help them.
I like how you wrote Harry and Hermione and show that they have both good and bad times and I love the two little ones, Lily is awesome and so is Vincent.
Good job on solving their problems and I have to laugh at Severus sticking Harry to the chair.
Looking forward to a sequel with Lily and the Snape family at Hogwarts, maybe?
Author's Response: I think that my father wishes he could stick me and my siblings to chairs sometimes. :) I have ideas for a sequel, but no time right now. Some maybe later. . . Thanks for reviewing!
Lovely! A wonderful story; an interesting Harry, too. Lily is too perfect for me, though :-) Mila
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you didn't hate Harry for his behaviour. Lily was a writing experiment, I guess she needs to be tweaked a little bit more. Thanks for reviewing and telling me what you thought!
Nice Christmas story. Thank you!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Happy Christmas! Thanks for reviewing.
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