|Title: The Cottage
||19 Aug 2011 12:13 am
|Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
Thnk you for agreat chapter I loved Minerva's reactions and Severus' to her!
So did Severus and Lily meet during the summer after he was taken by his grandfather? Is the grandfather the reason why Severus speaks the way he does or is it a survival method for Slytherin? How will Severus and Harry's relationship continue to grow? Will we see them fly together? Please write more!!
sigh, neglecting my homework to read this fic, but this is worth reading :D
phenomenal story so far and and i can't wait to find out what happen
your categorization of snape: amazingly good
i also like how harry still harbors some feelings about that night when Cedric died. he's still a teenager and he's learning to deal with the tragedy.
on a random note,
'Oh…this was just ducky! ' = LOL
I love you.
This is one of the most brilliant fics I've read in a long time- and it's 1000% better than the original; which was still pretty good. I particularly like Harry's dream about Voldie, abalone sacrifice and the sushi chef.
I love the story so far...I think I had the same reaction as Harry when I got to the bit about Snape teaching Lucius Occlumency...LOL
I also enjoy the humor...lines like "could hold onto a grudge tighter than a Grindylow to a Hippocampus" and "
...were just pulling her tail." had me rolling!
Thanks for a great chapter!
Oh my heart! What a lovely chapter. McGonagall's smothering hugs made me laugh and this whole end bit is all sorts of wonderful. :)
-Xedra (aka Kindra on AYLNO mailing list)
Loved the chapter! It was so fabulous!
I'm really likin this story. Please, update soon. This was a very good chapter, by the way...
Such a throughly enjoyable story so far! I look forward to future chapters!
another wonderful chapter!