This was really good! What a moving story.
I loved this. It left me all misty eyed :)
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this, and that it made you misty eyed. Thank you for reading. :-)
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| 23 Feb 2016 11:27 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked this story. :-)
This was really, really good. :) I so enjoyed this story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am glad that you enjoyed this story, and appreciate the feedback.
Beautiful story, I liked that you put Lily in the background without making her a little pink princess without guts, brain or backbone. I would have liked a longer story, exploring sev and James friendship and how they integrate him into the marauders if they do.
Like in "visions of sugarplumps danced over their heads" - brilliant story
Author's Response: Thank you so much, and now your comment about Sev and James has planted a seed, which may or may not come to fruition, but it's there. I am grateful for the feedback, and so happy that you enjoyed this story. Mahalo!
I do enjoy reading this. I'm glad that in the end Snape and James are in good terms.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this, and that you like how Snape and James ended on good terms.
Good story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.
I did really enjoy it. Lovely execution of the Challenge idea. Your dialogue crackles. And Snape is perfect, and grouchy, and what a beautiful ending for him.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I am happy to hear that you enjoyed this story, and that you thought that it was well executed. I am humbled by your praise, and am exceedingly happy to hear it as well. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 14 Apr 2013 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely story
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I enjoyed writing this story. I'm glad that you liked it.
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