Nice and fast read. Thank you.
I loved this story so much!!!! :)
A very interesting take on the proposed challenge. Nicely done, Pan. It made for a fun read.
I'm glad that Harry finally found a family. It must have been hard for Hermione though.
| Title: Epilogue
| 20 Mar 2015 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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This story turned out to be quite a surprise. I can't even imagine being related to Bellatrix! (Or married to her, for that matter.) But you carried off the twist nicely, although I would have liked to see a few more chapters dealing with the family dynamics, as well as Voldemort's defeat. Hope you're over your writer's block!
I really enjoyed reading this. It was very nicely executed. Cool idea.
Quite a few surprises in the storyline. Hope its got you back in the writing mood.
Author's Response: Yes it did thanks. I know it was short chapters and not much substance, but it really helped. One day, I will make it better.
Thank you, I liked the story. I think the short chapters were kind of neat and I appreciated the way you showed us the development, in action and in dialogue, instead of explaining things squarely. That kept the suspense up.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you. I am sorry that the chapters were so short, but did that on purpose to help me along, and not to get overwhelmed.
Nice! I liked it! :D Thanks for trying out the challenge!
Author's Response: Thank you. I will one day expand on the story to meet the challenge better, but the challenge helped me to get past my writer's block, because it was so awesome.
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