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Reviews For To Trust One-Shots
Title: To Belong 12 Jul 2021 12:11 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this Sorting. And I love even more that this amazing universe you have created has one-shots.
Title: To Belong 20 Mar 2021 2:19 pm
Reviewer: MellarkandArt (Signed) [Report This]
    I’ve been reading your rewritten version on AO3 until last night when I found this, and I’m really glad Harry was sorted into Ravenclaw! I definitely thought that or Slytherin.
Title: To Belong 24 Apr 2017 1:17 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    The Hat was quite accurate in its assessment of Harry IMHO. No way was he going to be a Lion. And I've always maintained that Slytherin would ruin Harry. Just like the Hat said, it would shut down any opportunities for Harry to develop emotionally and find his own path. He would be forced to become a cold, heartless and somewhat cruel and vengeful person just to survive.

    Ravenclaw is always the best choice IMHO for a kid that has even a smidgen of complexity in their personality.
Title: To Belong 08 Jan 2017 4:23 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I hadn't expected Ravenclaw though Harry is certainly intelligent. I wonder why Hermione wasn't ever sorted there? I suppose Rowling needed her in Gryffindor with the boys.

    Author's Response: I think Hermione was sorted into Gryffindor because, at her core, she is one. She operates like a Ravenclaw, certainly, but she intuits morals, and those morals drive her actions more than her pursuit of knowlege.
Title: To Belong 30 Mar 2016 10:16 pm
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent!
    I had speculated (I have quite spirited discussions with myself;-D!) that perhaps 'Jade' was magical, too, but then, as your original story progressed, I became increasingly convinced that Jade had been killed by her step-father and had only hoped that Harry would eventually discover the truth of her 'disappearance'. Was Jade older than Harry and could she already be at Hogwarts? If Jade knew Harry's name, from when they used to 'escape' for awhile and since she would have surely heard of 'Harry Potter' after arriving at Hogwarts, why wouldn't she have made the connection and maybe have alerted...Whoops, I forgot: Complete lack of trust in adults. Ah well!
    Anyway, great oneshot, but I'm a little confused about why you 'couldn't' do a sequel and opted to write these oneshots, instead?
    Also, I'm slightly surprised, that after the technical skill you displayed in your first story, to see quite a few typos and grammar errors in this. Were you in a great hurry or were you forced to type on an unfamiliar medium, like an iphone (I believe the 'i' stands for idiot, myself.)
    Anyway, thanks for sharing more of this story with us!
    MelJ
Title: To Belong 14 Feb 2016 5:16 pm
Reviewer: Kyralian (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm a little sad there's no full-blown sequel... I've just finished 'To trust' earlier today and loved it. It has become increasingly difficult to find well-written Snape and Harry stories, but yours was very good and touching. Thanks.
    You asked for recommendations, so here are some of my favourites:
    - Blood Magic
    - In Blood Only
    - Digging for the Bones
    - Harry Potter, age 8 and sequels (on fan fiction net)
    - A Year like none other and sequels
    - Better Be Slytherin!
    - Life as Dictated by a Talking Hat
Title: To Belong 14 Feb 2016 3:22 pm
Reviewer: Annna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved your story 'To Trust' and was very happy to see that you are thinking of writing some one-shots in that universe...
    I liked your variation of Harry's travel to Hogwarts. Will we see Snape's thoughts on/reaction to the sorting? And don't forget that Snape promised Harry a visit with Madam Pomfrey (something about a badly healed rib) - I'm not sure Harry would remember that, but Snape will for sure! ;->
Title: To Belong 28 Jan 2016 2:21 am
Reviewer: woodyt (Signed) [Report This]
    Please update soon I loved this & to trust was amazing. Harry in Ravenclaw can't wait
Title: To Belong 15 Jan 2016 7:55 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    So good to step back into your world.
Title: To Belong 17 Dec 2015 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad to see a one shot out! Loved the ravenclaw choice too. Can't wait to read more!

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