I LOVE this story!!! its wonderful!!! Severitus fics are the best....well, I guess this is a Sevitus fic, but I still love them SOO much. *grins* Actually, I am unsure as to what the difference is, but *shrugs* Oh, well. Anyway, update soon, please, as I really do look forward to reading more! Sev and Sal and Jerome are all awesome, btw! *Grins*
Delightful story. I look forward to reading more of it.
Kudos for your original character, Jerome. His presence adds to the story without causing an interruption to the narrative flow. You have neatly avoided a generic fanfic writer's fault of overdescribing a character!!!
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