This is a really fantastic and innovative story so far. I really love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
This is a really fantastic and innovative story so far. I really love it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Title: Things That Go Bump In The Night 2
| 24 Aug 2023 3:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very well written chapter you have a wonderful imagination thank you
| Title: Change of Plans
| 24 Aug 2023 3:31 pm
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Very scary chapter. I loved the part about Swallows and Amazons one of my favourite books as a child. Thank you
| Title: Things That Go Bump In The Night 2
| 24 Aug 2023 2:20 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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What an exciting chapter—with an unexpected end!
Yay! An update!
But what a turn at the end! Fairy with a horcrux...
Just binge-read this foc and really enjoyed it. :)
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the fic! I am really fond of this one, and enjoy writing more for it when I can. Thanks for reviewing! Enjoy the next chapter.
Binged through this in two nights! Stellar work. I really love your writing style, you're able to portray the difference between the three boys beautifully.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for a great review. I am so glad you enjoy the differences between each kid, I really wanted them to have their own voice and personality and so glad it shows. Thanks again. Enjoy the next chapter.
| Title: A Birthday Miracle
| 25 Oct 2022 11:06 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter thank you
Author's Response: You're welcome, and thank you for reading. It is much appreciated.
Thanks for updating! I’m really wanting some lemon drizzle cake now. The foal was so beautifully named. The scene reminded me at first of one in the Belgariad series. It was very nicely done. Thanks for the lovely chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for a kind review, it is much appreciated. I have not read that series, but glad it read well enough to sound published. Thanks again and enjoy the next chapter.
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