This was a frightening start, but lovely end to the chapter.
Thanks for your lovely characterizations.
Oh no, did Snape really do that? I feel sad about that, and hope that Harry will find the living HBP.
That was an interesting way for Snape to handle Umbridge. I wonder if she will retaliate.
Snape’s reaction to Harry’s comment was priceless.
Oh, I like this daring Snape! This is great so far.
That was so fun and bold of Harry, though truly rash if not downright idiotic! I’m really enjoying this story.
I love the way this story started!
I've really enjoyed this story so far. I usually try not to read stories before they're completed, but I was drawn in by the title, which made me laugh. I especially enjoyed Snape's interactions with Umbridge and his and Lily's notes in the book; it really makes their friendship come alive. And of course I also like it when he's protective of Harry.
That last scene was great as well. It's not often we get to see Snape make such a fool out of himself, and he doesn't even realize it.