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Reviews For Phoenix Burning
Title: Chapter 4, Horcruxes, Occlumency, and Lily 29 Nov 2023 8:42 am
Reviewer: Kaleesh (Signed) [Report This]

    How disappointing for yet another evil!Albus story to go untagged. I really wish people would follow the rules. I wouldn't have read 4 chapters of this and gotten invested and then let down by a comical acanonical premise otherwise.

Title: Chapter 9, A New Bond 20 Jul 2020 12:16 am
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks much!
Title: Chapter 7, Hogsmeade 19 Jul 2020 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Why would the students be allowed to go to Hogsmeade when they knew about the attack? Snape has already been outed as a spy so it seems irresponsible to send the students into known danger. Other than that, I’m enjoying your story.

    Author's Response: Think of it as similar to Harry's third year, when the rest of the students were allowed out in Hogsmeade despite Sirius Black running around. Dumbledore thinks that the teachers escorting his students will be able to protect and evacuate them in spite of the attack.
Title: Chapter 15, The End of the Matter 13 Jul 2020 3:57 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Well that was action-packed.
    Good job.

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1, A Forest Flight 13 Jul 2020 8:23 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    What a fabulous star.
Title: Chapter 15, The End of the Matter 11 Jul 2020 1:52 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!!
Title: Chapter 14, The Battle of Hogwarts 09 Jul 2020 3:58 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no...

    Author's Response: Muahahahaha!
Title: Chapter 8, The Battle of Hogsmeade 08 Jul 2020 2:43 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 7, Hogsmeade 08 Jul 2020 12:06 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh....

    Author's Response: Haha, indeed!
Title: Chapter 6, The Headmaster 08 Jul 2020 12:02 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Still feeling like Dumbles will be a problem.

    Author's Response: Maybe...

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