| Title: A Good Day
| 03 Dec 2021 10:22 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter! I loved the practical lesson and how the students reacted to it. The quidditch was amazing as I love how the group interact with each other and to see Hermione and Draco back together is brilliant. I’m glad you chose Luna as Harry’s interest she is a favourite of mine. Thank you for updating.
| Title: Return of the Slytherin Prince
| 11 Nov 2021 9:58 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating and for the assurance that you have planned out the story and will be completing it.
I think Harry and Draco’s relationship is very realistic and is growing into something really interesting. I’m wondering how the experience of Azkaban will affect his and Hermione’s relationship. Can’t wait to find out.
| Title: Do You Believe in Magic?
| 17 Oct 2021 1:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much I absolutely loved this chapter! The way Severus showed magic to Mae was so gentle and understanding that it showed his depth of feeling for her.
I’m so pleased you are continuing this story despite your new story I’d be upset if this one is not completed.
Author's Response: Thank you! This one is definitely my top writing priority. If it helps, I recently finished the outline through the end even though it's still about 3 or 4 arcs away.
| Title: Out By the Lake
| 09 Oct 2021 11:01 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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That was quite a peaceful, healing chapter until the end! I love that narcissa is coming around, I liked how she was when the boys were prisoners. I hope he manages to talk Mae around. Thank you a very peaceful chapter until you hit us at the end.
| Title: Saving Draco
| 29 Sep 2021 1:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you. I like how sneaky Dumbledore was but a real risk that Severus would not catch on. It will be good to have Draco back in the picture and to have Severus and Harry back at Hogwarts.. I would love to hear about the galleon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't forgotten about the Galleon. If I remember my outline correctly, that will come back in two chapters.
| Title: The Werewolf and The Metamorphmagus
| 18 Sep 2021 1:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry. You describe his feelings so well, thank you for a brilliant chapter and the fact that you update so regularly.
Me encanta!! Sigue pronto por favor!
| Title: Finding Forgiveness
| 15 Sep 2021 1:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I’m glad they have reconciled they definitely need each other. Thank you a wonderful chapter
| Title: Dr Matthew Taylor
| 29 Aug 2021 11:43 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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The only thing that reassured me that there is hope for the two of them is the next chapter title!
A brilliant chapter thank you
| Title: Breaking Point
| 15 Aug 2021 1:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear he has broken the statue of secrecy I think and that woman watching might be a witch. I think Severus could end up in prison with Draco! Thank you a great chapter
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