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Title: Family 31 May 2021 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks good for Severus but the last comments are very ominous. Thank you a wonderful chapter
Title: Community 23 May 2021 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you portray the slytherins negotiations, very clever. Please can we have more of the coin exchange that was a lovely bit of light relief for Harry and us.
    Thank you so much for this wonderful story it’s twists and turns make it so interesting and a joy to read.
Title: Things to Consider 18 May 2021 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    This chapter had wonderful highs and heartbreaking lows, a wonderful combination! Thank you so much for a great chapter and story
Title: The New Order 13 May 2021 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus he never gets any time off, I hope he gets his nap. Things are looking bad for him at the moment I do hope he is not sent to Azkaban that is not what he or Harry needs at the moment.
    Thank you for a brilliant chapter
Title: It's Time 30 Apr 2021 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very ingenious idea for the time slowing to cause the windows exploding.
    There was a big push in the 90’s to make specialist Cancer wards for adolescents into warm supportive places thank you for your description of one.
Title: The Ritual 30 Apr 2021 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sad chapter but warmth and humour with it. Thank you, I love the interactions between the group and the presents were so appropriate
Title: Apothecary 23 Apr 2021 10:12 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting and very informative chapter. I loved the scene in the library with all the students, they are so supportive and helpful for Harry.
    I was thinking about Narcissa not coming to see Draco after the attack, she was so concerned and supportive when he was undertaking the ritual and now so different. Did the battle change her so much? I’m sure it was explained somewhere and I must go back and read the Malloy chapters again.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! This time around we'll see a bigger focus on Harry and his friends (community theme) both inside and outside of his treatments. 

     

    Narcissa's reaction to the Battle of Malfoy Manor is very isolating. She's separating herself everything that reminds her of the events. All I can really say is that she's not yet healed and her story isn't over.

Title: Apothecary 23 Apr 2021 10:12 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an interesting and very informative chapter. I loved the scene in the library with all the students, they are so supportive and helpful for Harry.
    I was thinking about Narcissa not coming to see Draco after the attack, she was so concerned and supportive when he was undertaking the ritual and now so different. Did the battle change her so much? I’m sure it was explained somewhere and I must go back and read the Malloy chapters again.
Title: Malfoys' Interlude: Check In with Cobb 16 Apr 2021 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for an interesting chapter. Just when we thought Draco had decided on following the “good” path he veers off the rails! I hope Hermione manages to make him see sense.
Title: The New Plan 13 Apr 2021 4:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you. That was a lump in the throat chapter, but I loved the ending. It is right that he had Hermione and Ron with him at this time. I wonder how he will feel when he knows it was Draco he was talking to! A wonderful chapter thank you

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