I like how each character has a blind spot that correlates well with their characterization. No one's perspective of an event is perfect and what they don't notice gives us a deeper understanding of their character.
Snape's perspective always fills me with anger though, not gonna lie. I wanna smack him so bad. Lol. 😆
Also, something about Malfoy sweating like a wet rat after a workout is funny as hell. Excellent addition to the story. 😆
Thank you so much for updating. It was the perfect excuse for going back to the beginning.
I’m loving it.
The negotiations were fun! I do wish the adults would put the pieces together a little more quickly, but hopefully soon!
| Title: Take Root
| 21 Jul 2023 4:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for the long interesting chapter.
I loved your take on the muggle born and their games it was so thought provoking and interesting. I’m exasperated with the adults and how they skirt the real issues. They have had so many hints and Lucius especially with his knowledge should be seeing patterns and worries. But it all makes for a brilliant story so thank you so much for continuing to share it with us.
| Title: Thorn in the Side
| 20 Jul 2023 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating your fantastic story, great to have a chapter.
I love the owl fight and the thought of them all being in detention is hilarious.
I was just thinking of this story and how much I missed it yesterday! And now here you are! Love it.
Fun chapter! Thanks for updating.
| Title: Busy as a Bee
| 16 Mar 2023 12:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Iris (Signed)
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Absolutely love your stories! Can’t wait for more😍
| Title: Busy as a Bee
| 15 Mar 2023 9:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I can see why you named the chapter as you did, very busy indeed. I loved to see Holly and Harry flying, so sweet. I hope Harry can outwit Lucius, I’m amazed he can’t see how his behaviour to the Weasleys is affecting there relation ship. Perhaps he will when he sees Harry tutoring them. I loved seeing Sirius, Andromeda and Narcissa interact together and to hear that once even Bellatrix was friendly. The description that Andromeda gave for the reason for Tonks’ name was hilarious! Dudley being a “Personal Trainer is a wonderful twist and so original.
All in all a brilliant chapter thank you
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