Very evocative writing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! =)
| Title: CH 45: Penance
| 26 May 2023 4:19 pm
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Thank you a very emotive chapter. I think the manifestations of Albus and Lily are how Severus imagines they see and regard him rather than how they actually do. This is very powerful and gives the chapter such poignancy
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, you are also true as well with the manifestations.
| Title: CH 44: Kaleidoscope
| 27 Apr 2023 8:55 pm
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Loved their conversation and Severus’s reaction to the news that it was Neville who avenged him. Thank you
Author's Response: Hehe, that was a fun revelation for him!
| Title: CH 43: Firewhiskey
| 27 Apr 2023 8:27 pm
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Lovely to see George recovering and Ron being Ron. Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was very diligent in showing the journey of other characters.
| Title: CH 42: Crashing Waves
| 27 Apr 2023 7:53 pm
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Very interesting chapter with two very significant discussions, thank you
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: CH 41: Strength In Unity
| 07 Apr 2023 8:27 pm
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I love the way your Draco and Harry interact, great fun
Author's Response: Hehe thank you! Draco gets better! I was a bit rusty writing him at first. He's no insufferable LOL
| Title: CH 40: Confessions
| 07 Apr 2023 11:33 am
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I’m afraid I skimmed the nightmare so thank you for putting it in italics.
Very good chapter especially the ending, they both now want the same thing but time is running out, you are setting an excellent tense story, thank you
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
| Title: CH 39: Silver and Gold
| 26 Mar 2023 10:16 am
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I think Draco is very IC at the moment. Poor Neville I hope they find some of the missing soon. Thank you for all the updates.
Author's Response: Draco definitely has his moments in this story, but also a well-needed character growth.
| Title: CH 38: Distorted Shadows
| 26 Mar 2023 9:42 am
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Very powerful. I like Severus’s introspection, it makes me realise how he had to keep his own wishes in abeyance during his 16 years as a spy.
Author's Response: Sixteen years of abiding by everyone's wishes, and yet pushing away his own. So sad that he never got to live the life that he wanted.
| Title: CH 37: Wish
| 25 Mar 2023 10:15 pm
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Thank you a very exciting battle scene. Very interesting how you see post war Severus
Author's Response: Thank you so much! 😊
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