Awwww, I loved this. How Snape understood everything without Harry telling him. I love your version of Snape. I'm so glad that Filch took Harry to Snape in the first place. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased you like how I write Snape. He's one of my favorite characters to write. Lucky Harry that Filch randomly brought him to snape (probably thinking Snape would punish Harry the worse out of the staff). I'm very happy to have written this for the bingo contest you set up!
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|Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
Thank you a very powerful and compelling story
Author's Response: thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Awwwwwwww! I loved the ending. I'm glad that Snape was there and able to figure out what was going on with Harry. He's just a first year and Snape is right, he deserves to feel safe at school. I love it when Snape catches Harry at a lie and just knows. Thanks so much for writing and sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really love Snape looking out for Harry and trying to help him even if Harry isn't sure how to go about getting the help he needs. I love the dynamic between Snape and Harry depending on the different years and there's something particularly vulnerable about a first year/pre hogwarts Harry having Snape swooping in to take care of things.
GOD your work is always so breathtakingly beautiful. It reminds me why I love the art of writing so much. This was stunning, thank you so much for using your talent and sharing with us. I’d love to read more of this universe
Author's Response: Ah thank you!!! You've made my day a billion times over with such kind words about my writing! I fully intend to write more for this story :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I would encourage more. It was very well done. I love how Snape cared for Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Snape looking out for Harry, so more is in the plans!
This was a very moving short story. Thanks so much. I would love to read more, if you do come back to it! I really like how clearly Harry sees his peers life perspective in contrast to his own. Your version of Snape was terrific, though Filch was especially obtuse.
Author's Response: Thank you! I definitely have plans for a sequel :) I know there's a lot that still needs to be addressed like the bullying and Filch being horrible, and of course I'm looking forward to Snape being there for Harry as well!
“you haven’t been alright for quite some time, have you Mr. Potter?”
Author's Response: awww thanks so much for commenting on this fic! I'm glad you liked it :)