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Reviews For Doves and Daffodils
Poor little girl
Love it!
Oh no! What a cliff hanger, please don't let Tracy go through the veil she is such a lovely character. Thank you for updating
This is a very exciting chapter and I can't wait to see what happens. It was very difficult to read through. There are lots of word substitutions and grammar/punctuation errors that make sentences hard to follow. The substitution of Barry for both Harry and Barty made things especially difficult during the Dept. of Mystries scenes. If you reupload the chapter after some editing and corrections I'd definitely read it again. I'd love to focus on the story rather than split my attention with decoding. Poor Tracy.
Brilliant chapter as always. I loved the reception the returning teachers got, but not sure Sybil deserved it. No mention of Emily in the chapter, I hope she gets back in time to see the play. Thank you for the update.
Horrific contents in one way but brilliantly written and a lovely ending, if a little sad, thank you
Wonderfully Slytherin, brilliant chapter, especially with Harry getting it all wrong!
Love it. I can't wait to see Umbridge get what's coming to her.
Well done Emmeline! I love seeing Slytherins negotiate with each other. Thank you for updating.
Thank you, it's lovely to see the family so concerned and loving towards Lucy |
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