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Reviews For Surprising development
Wow a brilliant chapter thank you. Hermione has, as usual, got it right, Sirius is the last person to have as DADA teacher in his present frame of mind. Thank you for updating
A house divided against itself ... or, in this case, a school with houses divided against each other ...
Sirius seems a "right git"...can't wait to see how Snape and Harry deal with him! Also, the new spell is cool.
You write the different characters so well - their personalities are so distinct! Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you like it.
Very dramatic thank you
Nicely written view into Voldemort's mind.
Sorry forgot to leave a frog rating
Severus and Harry are behaving very much in cannon, I love how Severus is keeping Harry on his toes by changing his attitude. Thank you for your story Author's Response: Thank you very much for your nice reviews! I am glad you like the story so far.
Excellent chapter, I loved Ron's ideas of a rescue attempt and the duelling room looks scary and exciting, thank you
Oh dear, not a good start but perfectly in character, thank you
An interesting side-effect from use of the black quill. |
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