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Reviews For The Learning Curve
Wonderful chapter showing how, although they are back in the village, the world, and them has changed. Thank you
Thank you, although it's great to be back in the village it's sad that they are going to be drawn into the war. Thank you for updating your brilliant story
Fantastic chapter, lovely to be back in the village again though not in these circumstances
Thank you a brilliant chapter
Thanks for the chapter! Interesting to see that Harry's fate is on hold while the break goes on- maybe to give Umbridge time to recover. What's Callum doing there? Hell of a way to come from Scotland, and he can't have known Snape would even be there- Harry said to them it was Petunias house. I’m excited for the next part.
Oh dear, I wish Harry had seen the paper Umbridge had with his name on it, this means trouble
Just picturing the scene, and you painted it very well, made me laugh, thank you
A nice comfortable chapter with the interactions being more like the previous installmwnt at the village. Nice to see them comfortable together, stufying
I like the description of Harry finding a path to categorise his two Snapes. It sets up the difficulties Harry has with the two over the next chapters
I really like this chapter- the interface between professor snape and severus is a really interesting dynamic- and particularly when Dumbledore is there too. |
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