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Poor girl, bad enough being injured but also having Severus looking after her, you are cruel! Thank you for updating
Very good chapter I liked the library scene
Very dramatic I loved what she saw thank you
Very good description of a potion's class thank you.
Good characterisation of the three thank you
Interesting start thank you
Author's Response: Patronus I believe 😂. Thank you for the feedback. |
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