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Reviews For Left Behind
Awwww. This is awesome. I absolutely loved your Snape point of view. The Dursleys burned Harry's trunk, of course they did. I was really hopeful that they just tossed it, or kept it under the stairs. Is Harry's wand really gone? Wouldn't Dudley have wanted to steal it and hide it? Could Fawks donate a new feather so Harry could get a brand new wand? And where is Hedwig? Please tell me she is okay somewhere and not cooked in the fire. I love how determined and dutiful Snape is, looking for Harry's trunk and then deciding to try and get keepsakes and new belongings for Harry. This is so wonderful. I'm absolutely loving this story so far. Thanks so much for writing and sharing and updating!!
Awwww, I loved it! This chapter was soooo long. Wonderful! I love all the care Harry is getting from the orphanage leaders, the doctor and the women. I'm so glad that Snape showed up to take care of things though. Harry would be in Malfoy's clutches otherwise, can you imagine?! I loved how Snape helped Harry, how he apparated away with Harry so that Malfoy would not get him, how he healed his ribs and then his ankle. It must be so nice for Harry to talk about magic freely, and avoid a painful surgery! Snape really is a skilled healer. I wonder shere he learned that. And I wonder if this sort of healing might give Harry the idea of becoming a healer one day himself. I loved all your descriptions and the events that happened. I was so stressed for Harry a few times. Great job expressing all the emotions and conveying that uncertainty and stress! Wonderful chapter. I am really enjoying this story so far. Thanks for writing and posting it!
Ahhhh! I loved this so much. Especially the end. Snape is looking sharp! I hope he is there for Harry! I'm glad the Dursleys got in trouble for abandoning Harry.
Brilliant chapter thank you. I'm wondering what has happened to his invisibility cloak, I thought that couldn't be destroyed.
I don't recall noticing on chapters 1 and 2, but this chapter wins the prize for best descriptive scenes! So much detail in the way light filters in, or door knobs are worn, etc. Love it. And Lol! Here goes Snape getting persuaded (by Dumbledore and even his own reasoning) to take Harry in! Will Harry agree???
The doctor is going to have a difficult job explaining to the hospital how Harry is healed! I love the change of tension from ordinary to menace when Malfoy appeared and the horcrux he tried to leave. Poor Harry he now has an unsettling time trying to decide what to do with his life. I can't believe Dumbledore not coming to see how he is and why he's been abandoned. I don't even expect he will apologise for not looking out for Harry over the years. Thank you for updating your excellent story.
I’m hooked.
Thanks for updating. Such a great chapter!! |
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