Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 15 03 Jun 2021 1:05 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice story
Title: Chapter 15 15 Aug 2020 12:14 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15 27 Sep 2014 7:59 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    You had me hooked from the beginning.
Title: Chapter 15 07 Mar 2014 12:50 am
Reviewer: greenwings33 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so good~!!!
Title: Chapter 5 06 Feb 2014 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh, now your reasoning makes sense to me as well. Though I wonder if Severus still holds Voldemort's trust... well I'm sure I'll find out soon.

    Though, I'd like to have read something about Harry's thoughts when he figured that Severus was meeting with Voldemort.
Title: Chapter 4 06 Feb 2014 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you write Severus. His manner of speaking is very incharacter, I think.
    Even though I really don't understand why Voldemort would like Severus teach Harry the Dark Arts, after all he wants to kill him and equipping his enemy with such skill would be rather stupid.
Title: Chapter 3 06 Feb 2014 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, sorry if I sound annoying, but that just in this moment, Tonks would insist on eating something, just so you have a way how they can find out that Harry had no food just seems really unbelievable.
    Tonks is an auror and the first thing she things of when they find Harry all left alone is food?

    I think you wanted to create a situation where everyone realized how badly Harry was treated so they (especially Severus?) would want to take care of him. Which is good, but the situation could have been helped. Harry could have asked for help/told them what was going on right on the first day.

    He's a 15 year old boy and that he would be stupid enough to starve himself, I can't believe. He would have at least told Ron or Hermione.

    just my opinion
Title: Chapter 2 06 Feb 2014 4:25 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    I must say that I find it rather unbelievable that Harry would not contact at least his friends that the Dursleys had left him alone.
    They already were sending him food in the years before afterall. To starve himself although he had a way of contacting them sounds really stupid and it doesn't make sense.
Title: Chapter 14 16 Feb 2012 2:24 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, great ending!
Title: Chapter 13 16 Feb 2012 2:24 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! Great plot line so far

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