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Reviews by Jaylzd
When Harry is bitten by a werewolf in his third year, his life is turned upside down as he struggles to navigate a prejudiced world. Due to the threat he would be to his relatives, Severus Snape is assigned as his new guardian, and together, they both face fears neither were prepared for. A Sevitus story.
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, Werewolf!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Emotional Abuse, Panic attack, Violence
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Jan 2025 / 09 Jul 2024 Series: None - Challenges: Harry is a werewolf
Love that can't wait for next chapter and I lowkie hope Harry leaves to hogsmead 💀 Author's Response: Not yet! Thanks for reading, it is much appreciated, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter! Sirius is finally free, and Harry is looking forward to having a real family who cares. But then everything falls apart. Can Severus Snape figure out what happened to Harry and the secret he is hiding? Harry and Severus are thrown together due to an impulsive action by Sirius Black. This story is a response to the prompt "Disowned" by Nightshade sydneylover150.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Panic attack, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Jan 2025 / 24 Aug 2024 Series: None - Challenges: Disowned
Love it hope you keep his rigid and rude attitude like portrayed in the book also hope to see Sirius again! When the zombie apocalypse turns the whole world upside down, it also twists the fate of two people who thought they'd never be able to work together. Now, forced by their situation to grow beyond their past, those who were once defined by their mutual enmity will become united in their experiences and the hope of saving everything they care about before it is too late.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Cranky, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Sassy Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Can't wait for next chapter!!
Love this can't wait for next chapter and curious wondering if Harry might lose a limb in the future feel like that could be hella interesting 😛 What if Umbridge had a way to make Harry pay? His future at Hogwarts is in serious jeopardy, and with Dumbledore unable to help, there’s little hope left. This story is full of twists, with enemies becoming allies, new friendships forming, and people finally seeing things from a new perspective. Warning: abusive Dursleys. Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Jan 2025 / 09 Nov 2024 Series: None - Challenges: None
AHH ILYM THANK YOU IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER ALL DAY IM OBSESSED FINALLY SOMEONE PORTRAYING SNAPE IN HIS ACTUAL ATTITUDE I LOCE THIS SM AWAITING YOUR NEXT CHAPTER Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH ! I’m truly delighted that you enjoyed the way I portrayed Snape in this chapter. I think he has to be this spiteful, at least at the beginning. Snape isn’t someone who can change overnight—it has to be a gradual journey. He’s built his entire life around resentment, and that can’t just vanish in a single day. I’m so glad you liked the chapter!
My main hope is he remains his salty attitude like most people turn him into a teddy bear towards Harry after a bit what I'm hoping to see is yes Snape becomes less cruel and gives Harry awkward comfort and can have moments of kindness but mainly bitchy kinda Author's Response: My goal is to maintain his essence; I would never dare to turn the dungeon bat into a Hufflepuff. (Not that there’s anything wrong with Hufflepuffs, but I think you get the idea.) What I’m aiming for is to keep him as the same austere and intimidating Potions Master, the one who delivers sarcastic and cutting remarks, sometimes even wounding with his words. My objective is to portray him as the same proud Slytherin with a reluctant tolerance for one particularly annoying Gryffindor. Then, I’ll see if I can write their dynamic the way I have it in my head. What I can say for sure is that the one thing I absolutely do not want to do is completely distort Severus Snape’s character. Thank you for this exchange of ideas; I’ve really enjoyed discussing it with you,it’s been truly inspiring!
Just responding to your response last comment, completely happy I can't wait to read the next chapter
LOVE LOVE LOVE CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT Author's Response: Thank you so much. I’m really happy that my story has received such a positive response; it’s incredibly motivating and inspires me to write even more. At first, I wasn’t even sure about posting it, so I’m really glad you’re enjoying it. Author's Response: Thank you so much. I’m really happy that my story has received such a positive response; it’s incredibly motivating and inspires me to write even more. At first, I wasn’t even sure about posting it, so I’m really glad you’re enjoying it.
Wait what's your timezone I'm pst and I don't think we got the same evening time 😭 Author's Response: I’m Italian, so I believe the time difference between our time zones is 9 hours. That means when it’s 10 PM here, it’s probably 1 PM for you. I usually post at odd hours—it’s even happened that I’ve posted at what was 2 AM for me—so I don’t really have a set schedule.
Okay first off love love love!!! This is my train of thought what I hope to see don't bother taking my advice btw just want it out there, I'm hoping first Snape takes his anger out on Harry for umbridge hurting him and at some point Snape reluctantly steps up and protects Harry. What I also hope is he continues his investigation on Harry's home life forcing him to answer questions also him keeping a eye on him more though still mean. ALSO what if Harry confesses something to Draco and Draco snitches on him to Snape. At some point Snape starts using his authority on Harry to give him father son like punishments in a hilarious way like silencio him for 5 min sticky charm him to a chair 😭. I really pray to see snape getting pissed at black for his actions like hear me out what if when those two talk what if black slaps Harry and Snape sees this. Still I hope to see Snape mean side on cuz I feel like that really represents his personality mean and grungy but can show affection at some points. Just spitting out ideas cuz I'm a horrible writer and I love your writing pieces and I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!! (WHEN IM OBSESSED) also curious how did Sirius survive from Bellatrix like any contexttt anyways lots of loveee get some sleep lol Author's Response: Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).
As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.
I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.
I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.
A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol. Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).
As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.
I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.
I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.
A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol. Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter! |
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