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Reviews by LtsHrIt4ThBoyz

Forlorn Prophecy by elssha starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 27]
Sequel to Forlorn Hope and Forlorn Dream. "But here they stand, against my very wish, and push me toward my goal. Not with fists or words or thoughts, but by their very hopes and dreams, they call for me to live." Horris

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 16 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Dec 2012 / 29 Apr 2007
Series: Forlorn Saga - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Ch 15: Light's Purging 20 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I truly hope that, one day, you'll be able to continue/finish this incredibly original tale. I'm beyond awed by your talent and urge you to use it for your own (and our) advantage!
    Thank you!

Burnt Out by writeurlife starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 137]
Response to Burned Hedwig Challenge... After blowing up his aunt, Harry's uncle abuses him farther than his mental capacity can stand. Even his cousin is concerned, and sends a letter by way of owl "To Whom It May Concern" pleading for his cousins sake for help. But Harry needs more than to be taken from his family. He needs to gain the will to live.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 19 Feb 2010 / 08 Jun 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Burnt Hedwig to the Rescue
Title: Chapter 7: Quidditch Fanatics 16 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I truly hope this author is well and chooses to, one day, return and update/complete this pretty darn good story.
    Thanks!

    Author's Response: Hey. Thanks for the review. I am well... Not sure about completing anything at this point, but I'm not dead or anything :P

Rainbow Of Grey by Angels Broken Shadow starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
There is no such thing as black or white, only a rainbow of grey. Expansion of 'Fairytale'.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2011 / 22 Nov 2008
Series: The Little Child To Lead Them - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Once Upon A Time 15 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Well done! You broke me, but well and truly, done!
    Congratulations and THANK YOU!

Light and Dark by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Harry arrives at Hogwarts without any magic. Or does he? Severus is firmly in Voldemort’s camp. Or is he? Tangled loyalties and broken magics combine to make Harry’s first year more eventful than anyone anticipated. Entry in the 2009 Challenge Fest. In response to the Unmagical Harry Potter Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 10 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 May 2009 / 12 May 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Unmagical Harry Potter
Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later 02 May 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    OMG, I LOVE this story!! It's nearly perfect; the only thing I had a problem with is that it's much too SHORT! You could stretch this out a bit and give Rowling a run for her money, which, truth be told, wouldn't be terribly hard!
    She, unlike other, truly brilliant, thoughtful, and intelligent writers (I include you in that classification) in the Fantasy genre, 'hit' at the right time; a time when there was a dearth of 'magical fantasy', as the genre had previously fallen out of vogue. I grew up reading nothing but fantasy and Science Fiction, but I had moved on to adult writers, such as McCaffrey and Orson Scott Card and, therefore, paid little or no attention to 'Juvenile Fantasy', as I found the newest practitioners, in that field, to be less and less adherents to logic and common sense and more and more into 'blindly follow your leaders' type propagandizing. Rowling is not only just the worst of that lot, but also had access to the best PR campaign ever conceived!
    Anyway (I could and probably should write a treatise on all that's wrong with HP and Rowling!), THANK YOU for sharing your simply amazing talent with us and I shall treasure this story, always!
    Sincerely, respectfully yours,
    MelJ

Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue: Nineteen Years Later 17 Jun 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    I already left a review, back in May, but, after re-reading it, AGAIN (I can't help it: It's just that GOOD!), I do have just a couple of questions... I in no way dislike nor disagree with you deviating from canon; as a matter of fact, I prefer it, as I despise the books, as you'd know, if you'd read my 1st review. Now, what I'd like to know is: Was Sirius accused of betraying the Potters and what became of him and Remus? You opened the door, dear, with your mentioning the Marauders as Sev's tormentors at school; which, in turn, connects to the 'betrayal' in canon. I'm just curious, but otherwise: I don't question anything else!
    I feel unconditional love for this story!
    MelJ

Past Featured Story Away in a Manger by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 435]
On Christmas Eve, an unwanted child is left in a manger and found by a young Potions Master, changing both their lives forever. AU, implied child abuse, neglect, possible CP, Sev raises Harry.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Feb 2010 / 06 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Joy to the World 18 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wonderful! Definitely one of the best (top 3, easy!) Boy-Who-Lived-Gets-A-Family, stories I've ever read!
    Well done! I love the AU: Your take is almost everything I would have loved to have seen happen in HP - sorry, but I used to wonder if JKR even LIKED her own characters. Anyway, loved yours and THANKS for a lovely read!

Moon Fire by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 488]
A guilt-stricken Harry finds solace with a mysterious black stallion, never dreaming it's the Animagus form of Severus Snape. But Harry has a dark secret, one that could mean his death unless Snape discovers it in time. AU, no slash! Angsty!Harry Mentor! Animagus! Snape, some Draco too! HP/HG

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 18 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue: Midnight Family 08 Jun 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Magnificent! A truly original and oddly mature tale. A magnum opus! You've brought the 'old ways' and the devotions to the Gods and Goddesses to life, in a way that spoke to me, deeply! Selene, like Gaia, the Earth Mother, resonates with me; as the cold, male-dominated, straitjacketed (and yet, behind closed doors, sinful & bigoted) Christian church never has! My hubby and I subscribe to a belief in 'karma' Gods & Goddesses to describe our requests for 'blessings' and when we give Thanks for any and all good fortune. Maybe we just hadn't found the correct name to call our benefactors.
    Thank you for another wonderful story! I already follow you on FFN, but I hadn't read this story, yet!
    MelJ

Through a Glass, Darkly by Sita Z starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Malfoy Manor 16 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Excellent: Very well written, original premise and well thought out storyline. I would definitely enjoy reading more of your contributions; you actually write like an adult which is greatly appreciated!
    Thank you for a wonderful read!

What the Neighbor Saw by aikawa akihiko starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Mrs. Jahoda sees what is going on next door at number four Privet Drive and the only one who will help is Severus Snape

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Bashing, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Jun 2011 / 11 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Someone noticed
Title: Chapter 1: What the Neighbor Saw 05 Apr 2016
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wonderful! Thank you: Somebody finally CARED!
    MelJ

Hut of No Return by shadowienne starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
When the Dursleys abandoned Harry in the Hut on the Rock, he never could have foreseen how his dire predicament would lead to the fulfillment of his birthday wish for a different, better life.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Jul 2011 / 26 Jul 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Into the Dungeons 13 Dec 2013
Reviewer: LtsHrIt4ThBoyz (Signed)
    Wonderfully original storyline!

    Author's Response: Hi, there! Welcome to P&S! I just had to click on your penname to see who you were, & saw you'd just joined yesterday. Then I laughed at seeing myself in your bio description-- I lurked for about 3 years as I practiced writing & writing & writing... FINALLY got a story on this site & have been happily writing ever since! Don't give up-- if necessary, dream big while writing "small", and don't be afraid of posting a one-shot! Anyway, many thanks for reading "Hut" and taking the time to leave a review! So glad you enjoyed it! :-)


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