Ticking Clock by scaevola
Summary: July 31. Harry Potter is kidnapped on his 16th birthday from Privet Drive. Draco knows what happened, but will he be willing to tell? What does Snape have to do with all of it? (In-Progress.)
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape Main Characters: .Snape and Harry (required), Draco
Snape Flavour: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Media Type: None
Tags: Kidnapped
Takes Place: 6th summer, 7th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Violence
Prompts: Draco is the Only Witness
Challenges: Draco is the Only Witness
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1885 Read: 5970 Published: 30 Apr 2009 Updated: 12 Jul 2009
Story Notes:

This is my first attempt at a chaptered story. It sort of fits with a challenge though it started out just because I was bored in class and started writing. I hope it's not too bad.

(Sort of fitting and written for the 'Choices and Sides Challenge.)

1. The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) by scaevola

2. Counting Down to the 31st by scaevola

The Clock Struck Midnight (Prologue) by scaevola
Author's Notes:
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or anything involving it. I do this for my own enjoyment and writing practice only.

Bodies lay all around him as blood trickled from various wounds on his body. Voldemort stood over him, incanting various spells, some of which he was not familiar. “Please, Master…,” he begged as blood gurgled from his mouth. The monster’s spells seemed to come stronger as he cackled at the potion master’s words.

Snape’s head snapped upwards as he pulled himself awake. He had only fallen asleep in his chair. The clock struck midnight, its sound ringing through the silent room. ‘It was merely a dream,’ Snape sighed and looked down at the forgotten book on his lap. It was now July 31. As no students were around Hogwarts in the summer, he was free to relax and study without having to supervise detentions or grade papers. He simply did not wish the trouble of returning to Spinner’s End and the memories that went with it. Snape had enough problems at that moment as it was.

It had been more than a year since Voldemort had returned now, and Snape already wished that the war was won. He was tired of playing the double agent and keeping tabs on Potter’s spawn. He feared that Voldemort would find something that he did not expect and doubt him, causing the events of his dream to occur. Snape dared not think of it, his dreams often brought this fear to the forefront of his mind.

The lanky, greasy-haired man groaned lowly in pain as his mark began to burn.

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Draco stood amongst a growing crowd of Death Eaters, hidden beneath a mask and thick, black robes his father had lent him. It was now after twelve and the others had been arriving steadily. He would not be marked until he graduated, but his father wished him to be present on this night to witness the present he would soon be granting the Dark Lord.

There were several other junior Death Eaters in the crowd that night, but none knew that another was there. An unwritten vow of silence reigned over such meetings, and even those who were not absolutely certain that they wished to join never said anything except that they looked forward to taking the mark.

The small bit of chatter that had been going on stopped the moment that Voldemort stepped into the room proper. He had been hidden away in one of the dark corners, just watching his followers. His giant snake Nagini followed him, flicking out her tongue out over several members boots as she passed. Each man started and scrambled back away while trying to keep their composure.

“My Death Eaters,” he began coolly before sitting upon his throne. “Tonight, in honor of Harry Potter’s birthday, we shall have a… celebration. There is a village near—“

Voldemort stopped mid-sentence as a lone figure stepped into the group. He held up his wand and spun it lazily in the figure’s direction. “You are late!”

“My lord,” the masked figure began as he stepped forward, his tone soft. “As you are well aware, there are wards preventing apparition around Hogwarts, and it takes me time to be able to sneak outside them to prevent the old fool from wondering. He knows too much, at times.” His words were silky and smooth, utter disgust for ‘old fool’ even while he seemed to be reverent of the thing he spoke to.

Voldemort seemed to roll his eyes at Snape’s words and flicked his wand towards the potion master with a muttered Crucio. “Next time be faster, Severus.” After a moment, the spell was lifted and Snape was able to move back in with the others. Someone leaned over and whispered what he had missed almost inaudibly as Voldemort began on a speech of the superiority of pure bloods and getting rid of Harry Potter.

What Snape did not know was that the whole time Draco’s eyes had been on him.

To be continued...
End Notes:
Thank you for reading. This is the beginning of the story and there shall be Harry in it as well. He's been foreshadowed. Constructive criticism is always appreciated.
Counting Down to the 31st by scaevola
Author's Notes:
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter. That is JK Rowling's right. I'm just doing this for fun and writing practice.
A/N: Sorry for the length between updates. I've been horribly busy with finishing high school, I was taking 10 classes to finish on time, and then I have a roleplaying game which keeps me terribly busy. I've written this chapter about four times and this is the only time I've actually gotten somewhere. I hope it's alright.
PS: I'm looking for a beta if anyone could help out in that department, and I've fixed the Voldemort speech thing of the prologue, so that should be changed in a few.

Tiny droplets of water somehow managed to drip into the cell where Harry Potter lay bruised. ‘What a way to spend a birthday…’ he thought miserably as he rolled over in the small bit of straw laid about on the ground. His head ached where Malfoy Senior had struck it with his cane earlier. Beneath his shirt, several other bruises were beginning to darken. His glasses lay on the floor of the cell next to him, shattered and useless.

The cell was small, dark, and musty. Bloodstains splattered the walls, long since dried and darkened to an awful brown. There was only enough room for him to stretch his legs out if he stood or lay diagonally across the cell. Even then, it was a squeeze. There were no windows for light to come in through, and water dripped down from the ceiling. Nevertheless, none of that mattered to him. He had been depressed since the incident at the Ministry of Magic. Not even Dudley’s taunts or attempts to torment him had broken him out of the shell he had placed around himself.

The only reason he had even stepped out of Privet Drive was because there were fumigators coming to spray for insects of some form and they would not do it unless every living thing was out of the house. Petunia’d had to drag him out of the house, but that had been the mistake. Once they were on the sidewalk, all he remembered was everything going black and waking up to Lucius Malfoy hitting him with his cane before locking him in the cell.

If there were Dementors about, I bet this would be just like what Sirius went through…’

The sound of boots clicking against the floor did not pull him from his thoughts. He barely even registered that there was a noise reverberating against the dead silence of the dungeons.

Slowly the clacking of the boots grew louder until they stopped. The boots stood right in front of Harry’s cell, perfectly polished and shined, attached to none other than Draco Malfoy. “Not so perfect now,” sneered the blond. “Are you, Potter?”

When Harry did not respond, Draco took a step closer to the bars and kneeled down to get a closer look. However, as he opened his mouth to taunt Potter more, the sound of footsteps came to his ears, and the familiar clack of a cane against the cold, stone flooring. He stood immediately, brushing off some invisible dust from his tailored robes. “Draco, how many times must I tell you that it is below you to bring yourself down to the level of this… filthy half-blood.”

Though Draco looked up at his father, he could not help but catch the sharp movement of Potter’s head snapping up to glare at them. “I’m sorry, Father.”

“Master will be pleased of this great capture—”

“That’s why I always manage to escape,” the black-haired boy muttered.

Lucius’ haughty gaze turned down to him and his eyes narrowed in a way that spoke of the dangers of angering him, but he simply said to Draco as he brandished his wand and pointed it towards Harry. “Perfect time to teach you to use an unforgiveable properly, Draco. Crucio.”

Somewhere above the bowels of the dungeons, a clock struck three. It was the afternoon of July 30.

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“Now, Severus, my boy, I know you and Remus do not have the best history, but after the last year’s events I was rather hoping—“said Albus Dumbledore as he popped another lemon sherbet in his mouth. “Are you certain you wouldn’t care for one?” The man’s eyes sparkled over his half-rimmed glasses while Snape glared at him.

Bringing a hand up to his face, Severus pinched his nose to stave off the headache that was forming behind his eyes. “For the thousandth time, headmaster, I would not. Especially not when you are trying to bring back the werewolf! Whom you know has been a danger to students in the past. I do not see why you have insisted upon bringing—”

“I shall not speak more on this with you, Severus. The board has agreed on the condition you make him Wolfsbane again… after the situation with Dolores Umbridge. I will not have you antagonizing him, and I shall be very disappointed if any such comes to my attention.” Though the man still spoke with his usual smile, his eyes spoke volumes of the sword that the words hid.

Stiffly, Snape nodded to Dumbledore as he occluded more fully and slowly stood from his chair. “If that is all you needed, headmaster, I will return to my lesson plans.”

He could not ever forget that the man in front of him was likely the greatest wizard of their age, and most certainly the greatest manipulator. The thought of Lupin returning to Hogwarts frightened him; he did not like the prospect of having to be anywhere near a werewolf.

“Of course, my boy, I do not mean to keep you. Remus will be arriving in time for supper.” The headmaster picked up another of the sweets from his bowl and popped it in his mouth as he turned back to some of the paperwork on his desk, not looking up to see clenched look he knew would be on the younger man’s face as he left.

The potions master was glad that the castle was practically empty as he descended the stairs from the headmaster’s office. If it had been during the school year, he would have prowled the halls and taken out his frustration on whomever he first found doing something they should not. Potter was always an easy target. The portraits and ghosts for the most part left Severus alone, as they had been on the receiving end of his temper enough to shy away.

However, he did not expect to come upon the person he would least like to see as he walked downstairs to the main floor. “Lupin,” he hissed as he stepped past the man carrying up a box. Much to his inner chagrin, Severus saw a flash of something akin to upset and anger in the werewolf’s eyes.

“Severus,” Remus replied in a level tone. He had understood in time why Snape had revealed his secret after the incident Harry’s third year, but it had been hard for him to find work after. His clothes were shabbier than they had been last time Snape had seen him, and he looked more pallid than he had before.

Sneering to himself, Snape reminded himself that the werewolf was not to be pitied, thinking of how dangerous he was to others when he changed on the night of the full moon. ‘At least I have nearly a full month before I have to make that blasted brew for him again.’ For a while, he had kept up with the potion out of something akin to guilt, but he had stopped when the entire business with Umbridge got too complicated to him to have time.

When he finally managed to reach his rooms, all he wanted to do was sink into his armchair with a glass of firewhiskey and sulk. Everyone was bound to be a buzz at dinner about Potter’s blasted birthday being tomorrow. Just because he did not wish the brat dead did not mean he had to fawn over him like a blithering idiot.

To be continued...
End Notes:
If you get this far, thank you for reading. I'd love to have constructive criticism because this is my first try at an actual, multi-chapter story, and I know I have a lot to learn. I'm attempting to use Jeffery Deaver's style of not actually showing violence, but letting the reader imagine.


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