I find it really interesting that instead of the whole evil Dumbledore idea used in a lot of fan fictions, you've changed it so it's Harry, not the viewers, who is lead to believe the worse of him. I'm really happy that you didn't go with that overly used idea. :)
Another greate chapter. :D
| Title: Chess Master
| 20 Jun 2014 2:25 pm
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| Reviewer: hule (Anonymous)
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i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
i wonder where he will be sorted. :)
| Title: Chess Master
| 19 Jun 2014 7:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Wow this was a good chapter! I loved the way you wrote Harry's character and looking forward to the angsty stuff. Update soon?
| Title: Chess Master
| 18 Jun 2014 10:33 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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That was great. I really loved seeing Harry's perspective change and deepen even while he remains largely silent. It's very realistic and portrays his intelligence. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chess Master
| 14 Jun 2014 11:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I must say I am with Harry in this as I can't stand Dumbledore and would like to see him manipulating Harry and Harry winning! Great chapter, I thought about this story last night and imagined a scene with Harry sorted into Slytherin and Dumbledore trying to change it and Harry refusing and saying he would go to the papers! I had great fun thinking of it so thank you,
Yay! I'm so excited for the next chapter!!! Love it so far.
| Title: Chess Master
| 12 Jun 2014 8:55 am
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| Reviewer: Bones (Anonymous)
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Yes! Another chapter! Thank you and *does a little jig of joy in my room* :) I like how you portray Snape, not suddenly mushy but just does what he can according to who he is. I wonder if that make sense...
One of my very favourite fics is Armilla by Coral Grace. Potter is not the main character there, but I love it. Read it tons of times.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, that makes perfects sense, I'm really glad you think I've portrayed that characteristic well. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll go check iit out...
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