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Title: Nip it in the Bud 25 Jun 2024 6:31 am
Reviewer: DonnaNoble (Signed) [Report This]

    I made an account just to comment. I love this story but want to slap these characters! What the hell is wrong with Lucius, Narcissa, Regulus, Minerva, and everyone else that knew about Holly and Harry’s relationship??? What kind of foolish and immature bullshit were they playing at by not telling Severus the truth??? The first moment it was discovered Lucius should have gone to Snape and told him. If Snape was angry Lucius should have told him to grow the fuck up and care more about Holly than his own pettiness. Instead they let everything fester and get messier. Holly was hurt because she was unsure if she’d get to see Harry anytime soon. This could have been resolved weeks ago. She resisted Snape because he was mean to Harry, but this could have been addressed by Harry, Holly, and Snape all talking. Snape is going to be hurt when he realizes that Holly was just using him to get to Harry. Draco is hurt because he doesn’t understand why Holly chose Harry (a complete stranger) over him even though he apologized. Harry and Draco are going to have to work together in the war but their relationship is now filled with more resentment. Snape just put a kid’s head through a damn window because his alleged family didn’t tell him the truth. And this bullshit of ‘Snape will be mad so let’s not tell him’ makes no sense because obviously Snape finds out and he does it during school- where he can and does hurt children. Now how the fuck is Holly supposed to feel about Snape after seeing him abuse Potter? I swear- the adults in this story need their asses kicked. This is some high school drama.  They better get their shit together! 

Title: Nip it in the Bud 09 Oct 2022 9:15 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you an excellent and long chapter. Given Severus’s temper I’m not surprised he reacted so badly but surely even he will realise he has gone too far this tie. I loved the breakfast scene, Holly is such a Sneaky little Slytherin, and getting Harry to braid her hair was wonderful, especially Lavender’s reaction I’m looking forward to seeing Harry doing her hair! Thank you so much for updating your outstanding story.
Title: Nip it in the Bud 09 Oct 2022 4:44 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Holly was so clever and sweet. I can understand Severus’s reaction, and hope he learns the back story soon. I wonder why Lucius or others “in the know” didn’t better prepare him for Holly’s inevitable behavior. I’m so looking forward to the next chapter, and many thanks for this great one!
Title: Nip it in the Bud 08 Oct 2022 11:51 pm
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
    So good! Dont wait too long to give more! I wanna know what happens! I'd give 12 chocolate frogs if I could!

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