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So much happened in this chapter! I love the librarian. And oh what a relief thaylt Snape knows about the abuse now.
This is such a sad but sweet chapter
I like the system in the takeaway, its a nice touch. The way we see ron acting like ron even when its trhough snapes perspective is great. And you handle snape finding out neatly too
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
Finally, Snape is getting with the program! I can’t wait to see what happens next.
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