GREAT BEGINNING!!!  This is really a cool story.  I like that there's friendship from the get go!  There's a genuine bond between Harry, Draco, Ron and Hermione. Awesome to read about Luna and Neville coming later into the picture!  It's an original idea in having Severus as Harry's father from the beginning of the story.  I'm sure we will get into the background later???  Wow, the Patronus from the characters were a surprise.  I like that Harry's patronus was a Lion.  It's an original idea and goes with his house.  Severus patronus a tiger sweet!  I'm happy to read that Lucius is a kind soul and loving father to Draco!  Sad to read that Narcissa is missing??  Hopefully she's ok and waiting to be rescued.  It's an excellent idea how you added exta touches to the story like Harry using the media of art as a tool to express himself when he was an emotional wreck.  I think that music is a brilliant idea to calm one down when stress.  The idea with the scrying mirror is cleaver.  Can't wait to read how Sirius and Lupin play into the fold of this story!!!!