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Title: Chapter 17 21 Jan 2025 3:48 am
Reviewer: Razorblade2 (Signed) [Report This]

    I did enjoy how Draco, Harry and Severus have change during their time at Prince Manor.  The name you gave for Severus home was clever.  I know these characters belong to JKR but you molded them to be your characters and I enjoy reading those slight changes.  It's nice how you soften the rough edges around Draco and Severus from the books.  Harry is tolerable and I can see the subtle changes in his thinking towards the Slytherins.  I like how you're building the story and the characters.  It's an original ideal your storyline on Draco and Harry having Aether and Elemental magic.

     

    Tag or Owl me at HEX when you upload the next Chapter 61, thanks!

Title: Chapter 17 16 Dec 2023 1:33 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, so glad Harry apologized.

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