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Reviews For Coming Back Home
Thank you for the hopeful chapter and for sharing your thoughts. I felt that we were getting to the end of the story in this chapter, although I do want to see Molly getting Severus to stay for lunch! I think in a way it might be freeing to finish this story after the Sunday and start again with a sequel and the new ideas you want to explore. Author's Response: Thank you for another comment. I ended up deciding to do just that and finish this first part of the stories after the lunch at the Burrow. Hopefully it will be a satisfying (first) ending. Anyway, the next chapter is up now. I hope you like it too :) |
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