I loved the epilogue. What a beautiful reunion of Harry with Sirius and Severus. I bet the parent Malfoys are not happy at Harry changing the timeline since Draco's gone now. Do they remember?

Some corrections:

Harry returned the hug with surprising ease. He noted that an inch or two on Severus.

that he had an inch

Severus actually grinned. "Ah, but as I died at thirty-eight, I expect to look way for some time. 

look that way

"Well." Severus cleared his throat. "Harry, I also wish to apologize for how attempted to teach you

for how I

Thanks agan for writing and sharing this story! It had such a happy ending. A pleasure to read.

Love it!