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Title: 11)Detention 07 Dec 2024 7:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you so much I love how Draco is changing here.



    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I’m so glad you liked Draco’s transformation. I’ve always hoped he could redeem himself and realise the mistake he would have made by serving Voldemort. He was just a boy, caught in an impossible situation, and I really felt sorry for him

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Not me refreshing the page every hour 👻



    Author's Response:

    Today I posted a bit later than usual. I know, I know, it’s 4 in the morning, I should be sleeping. I’m not sure why I’ve developed these habits.

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 5:27 am
Reviewer: appelsinchoklad (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m beginning to think you like to torment your readers with cliffhangers
    Another great chapter as usual, I love the fact that Draco had enough heart to help Harry
    I’m guessing and hoping that Snape is not angry at Harry but at what happened to him
    With that said, I’m really looking forward to next chapter, I love waking up in the morning and finding a new chapter to read

    Author's Response:

    Ah, you’ve caught me—I’m guilty! I absolutely love tormenting you all by leaving you hanging.

    I’m so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and it makes me happy that you’re enjoying my story. I hope I can keep you satisfied and manage to give you your morning chapter!

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 4:54 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! I love a hesitant Draco to the rescue.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it!

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 1:56 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Just responding lol okay first off I just woke up from a nap so mb I thought we were 6th year for a solid second ignore me 😭👍and yeah I really look forward to the next chapter as for my section on punishments totally agree and I'd just like to say people that do corporal punishment for Snape and Harry really creeps me out it's gross can't stand reading that shit! 😭 also for Sirius totally agree in the books Sirius highly sucks all he saw was his father and overall childish and selfsish. Also wondering how you plan to incorporate snapes soft side while him still having his personality anyways cheers! Can't wait to see next chapter highkey onsessed your such a great writer!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! Don’t worry, it happens to everyone to get a bit mixed up. I’m glad we see eye to eye on so many things. Anyway, I think that to stay true to Snape’s character, I’ll write him as being very awkward and stiff when offering comfort, and generally very reluctant to give compliments or say kind words.

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 1:38 am
Reviewer: FrackPockets (Signed) [Report This]
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Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 12:55 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Also 2 more things!

    I CANT WAIT TO SEE DRACO AND HARRYS FUNNY FRIEND DYNAMIC SLOWLY FORM

    also was Snape angry at both Harry and umbridge Harry for getting "himself" in trouble him seeing him again and umbridge using those tactics on him?



    Author's Response:

    Let’s just say that Harry sees Snape’s angry glare and believes it’s entirely directed at him, when in reality, it’s much more than that. Having attended many Death Eater meetings, Snape recognises the signs of the Cruciatus Curse and immediately understands what has happened. He’s furious, especially at the number of times it’s been cast.

     

    Also, I think Snape cares deeply about Hogwarts, and seeing that a real torture took place within the ‘sacred’ walls of the castle enrages him. Not to mention the fact that he feels he’s failed once again in his promise to Lily.

     

    By the way, I don’t know why, but every time I send a response, I end up sending it twice. I’m really clumsy, lol.

     

    Ah, I almost forgot! I’d like to create a dynamic of unity between the houses, so they can come together against the “pink witch.” This will probably lead to a reluctant alliance forming between Draco and Harry.

Title: 11)Detention 26 Nov 2024 12:47 am
Reviewer: Jaylzd (Signed) [Report This]

    Okay first off love love love!!! This is my train of thought what I hope to see don't bother taking my advice btw just want it out there, I'm hoping first Snape takes his anger out on Harry for umbridge hurting him and at some point Snape reluctantly steps up and protects Harry. What I also hope is he continues his investigation on Harry's home life forcing him to answer questions also him keeping a eye on him more though still mean. ALSO what if Harry confesses something to Draco and Draco snitches on him to Snape. At some point Snape starts using his authority on Harry to give him father son like punishments in a hilarious way like silencio him for 5 min sticky charm him to a chair 😭. I really pray to see snape getting pissed at black for his actions like hear me out what if when those two talk what if black slaps Harry and Snape sees this. Still I hope to see Snape mean side on cuz I feel like that really represents his personality mean and grungy but can show affection at some points. Just spitting out ideas cuz I'm a horrible writer and I love your writing pieces and I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!! (WHEN IM OBSESSED) also curious how did Sirius survive from Bellatrix like any contexttt anyways lots of loveee get some sleep lol



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).

     

    As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.

     

    I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.

     

    I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.

     

    A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol.

    Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter!



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! I must say, your enthusiasm is really contagious right now. I don’t want to give any spoilers, but I think I’ll be able to meet most of your expectations as it aligns with what I initially wanted to write. I think as their relationship develops, I’ll definitely let my imagination run wild. Of course, Snape could never go too far with punishments, given Harry’s childhood, so he’ll have to come up with something more creative (I’m being wicked, but I’m already having fun imagining what I could do).

     

    As for Sirius Black, I’m not a huge fan of him, mainly because of how he treated Severus, and also for other reasons. Regarding whether he survives Bellatrix, I’m still unsure what to do. Bear in mind, we’re in the fifth year, and the battle at the Ministry hasn’t happened yet, so Sirius isn’t dead at this point.

     

    I’m not sure whether to change this plot point; on one hand, if Sirius dies, Harry would have nowhere to go, and Snape could step in and take him in, though reluctantly.

     

    I have so many ideas buzzing around in my head, but seeing what you’d like to read, I’m happy to tell you that you won’t be disappointed.

     

    A greeting from Italy! It’s 2 am here, I don’t know why I’m still awake at this hour, maybe you’re right, I’ll try to switch off my brain lol.

    Hope to see you tomorrow with another chapter!


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