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Reviews For Acid Reigns
Thank you for updating. Great chapter for Harry and his rather odd teacher. I had a vision of Harry smuggling his guitar and amplifier into Hogwarts! Author's Response: Thank you! That would take some doing lol Never fear: the guitar is along for the ride, once we?re on the way to Hogwarts!
Severus would check out Harry's teacher before allowing him to be alone with him. Author's Response: He does, it?s just ?off camera,? because this is Harry?s POV. He also scans his thoughts while on the stoop :)
Eddie Ate Dynamite, Good Bye Eddie. That's the only thing I remember from the quarter we had guitar lessons in elementary school music. I'm glad to see Harry getting into lessons. It's great to see him pursue this. It's so interesting how Harry, like most kids, is consumed by what's going on in his world. When he's in the shop he's consumed with helping Severus or painting his sign. When he's at guitar his whole world is about guitar. He's not worried about the Death Eaters, the depositions, Dumbledore or the magical world, the family finances, or Tobias. His world looks different than Severus' because he's 8. Only sometimes do other things sneak in- Yax and Wulf sometimes get in because of the trauma. Other topics sometimes sneak in at school, but that has more to do with boredom. I like the way Harry's world and POV are written in this story. That was not skunk parts. Author's Response: Lmao! Nope! Definitely not skunk parts xD |
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