Potions and Snitches :: Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Unchartered Waters	02 Jan 2025 10:13 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)	[Report This]

Great to have you and your wonderful story back.

Tobias and Minerva have said some necessary and hard things to Severus and Hermione, good for them. Severus is continuing to be blind to what Harry is he can't even see why he is in a coma for so long, someone should tell him a few home truths, Lucius tried but he doesn't know a lot, but of course Harry wants to keep his secrets. Thank you for updating

Title: Unchartered Waters	01 Jan 2025 4:55 am
Reviewer: animefreak728 (Signed)	[Report This]

Wow. Welcome back and happy new year! Well wishes from the U.S. 😄

As per usual, I enjoy how the story shows snippets of people's points of view for different things. It's fascinating and keeps the story from feeling like the camera is super glued to one spot.
I'll admit, I'm glad Holly pointed out that her and Harry wouldn't mean much to Malfoy Sr if not for their roles/use in his life. I'm glad she's an observant character.
Another thing I liked was Snape's talk with his father. It's particularly poignant when it's coming from "the source" of his worst traits. Speaking of people's worst traits, I'm now kinda curious how Snape Sr would react to the Dursleys. I doubt it'd ever happen, but I doubt they'd get along. He'd probably clock them as just as horrible as he was.