Noooo....why the cruel cliffhanger!!!!!

-thunk head on laptop-

I'm glad that you retraced back to Severus, Leif  and Alexei at Hogwarts.  I was mesmerized reading how they got to the Ministry.  I knew it, Draco calling Severus but it was apparition.  Hmmm...I wondered why he couldn't have apparate from Hogwarts to the Ministry.  Then Voldemort draining Harry's magic.  Where is Leif?  Don't let Alexei die!  Then the ending with Severus taking out Lucius...WHY???  I mean couldn't you have Severus push him into the veil???  What's happening to them getting the prophecy????  I know you said this was a long chapter but it didn't seem like it.  When I reach the end of the chapter, I thought that went by quick.  I hope the next chapter will be out SOON!!!

I did go back to reread it!

Also, I like the chapters with numbers and giving them a title would be a good idea too!