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Title: Chapter 64 04 Apr 2025 11:38 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]

    Love it!

Title: Chapter 64 02 Apr 2025 3:58 pm
Reviewer: Razorblade2 (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, I didn't see that coming with the healing process.  That was so creative!  I did feel relieved to finally find out what happened to Alexei and how he's recovering.  I understand about Alexei being stabbed by Lucius but where was Leif when Voldemort and Lucius came through the door in the Dept of Mysteries.  I really like the tender touch of Harry's parents and Narcissa giving Severus their blessing to take care of their sons.  I'm was so happy to read Narcissa did love her son, what mother wouldn't love their son. I was wondering about Sirius and I'm glad he came around.  It will take time for him to reflect and understand about how times change. 

    What happened to Dumbledore and Umbridge?   What about those rotten Slytherin students that beat up on Draco, what's going to happen to them?

    Draco is going through a lot with the lost of his parents.  I didn't think about his trauma.  

    What happened to the marks they received from the officials who came to see a demonstration of the work which Harry and Draco replaced the Dark Mark from Severus arm to a rune?  Did the boys get accepted to the school?

    It would be nice to have a backstory to Severus, Leif and Alexei.  How they came together and bring it to the beginning of this story.

    I know it's early to ask but when is the next chapter up!!  It would be nice to read about them returning to Prince Manor and seeing them a normal family...well creating havoc as teens seem to do.

    I don't think this chapter was long enough.  I feel like it flow so quickly as I read it!

Title: Chapter 64 02 Apr 2025 5:48 am
Reviewer: SpiritTree (Signed) [Report This]

    Thank you for the great chapter!


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