I love your Snape. His conversation with Harry felt a calming balm.
| Title: Remembering James
| 25 Mar 2007 1:05 am
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| Reviewer: Kittykat91419 (Anonymous)
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(I don't belong here, and I'd drop this in the group, but I don't have access at the moment, and I don't want to forget.) I never even though of Lucinda... That really goes to show how much re-reading this is worth. I've done it multiple times and this is the first I've even given it a second thought. How useful it would have been for Harry to know...
It's cute that Harry keeps mentioning the whiskey, it reminds me he is still just sixteen.
I forgot to mention earlier, but sals coloring is really cool. Sals is a snake in gryffindor colors... hhmmm... you know your story could be something students analyze and write essays about in english class (one of the good ones). So much foreshadowing, symbolism, and themes... Probably why your fic is the best fanfic... It's a classic!
This is turning out really great so far!
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