You have the most amazing way of writing absolutely perfect lines to end a chapter on.
| Title: Learn By Experience
| 08 Jul 2014 2:20 am
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| Reviewer: tsuj (Signed)
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He saw his mother's face peering down at him, her mouth making cooing noises as her arms rocked him back and forth. He heard his father clapping with delight when he toddled forward on uncertain feet. He saw them both, smiling, tucking covers around him in his crib as they put him to sleep.
Truthful Dreams . . . and the truth he learned was one he'd longed for ever since he'd realised that children weren't supposed to live in cupboards:
Once upon a time, Harry Potter had been dearly, tenderly loved. ------- No matter how many times I read this, *sniff* incredible sense of a longing finally answered...well, it gets me every time.
| Title: Learn By Experience
| 09 Mar 2011 4:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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I am still LOVING this story - THANKS! I'm just about half way there!
| Title: Learn By Experience
| 25 Sep 2008 11:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Aww, that line at the end made me tear up a bit, I'm such a sucker for this story, it really is lovely.
| Title: Learn By Experience
| 09 Apr 2007 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter. I must point out that I really like the way the relationship has progressed between Snape and Harry. I like how they both are new at the family concept between each other and it just makes it a better story to read of thier struggles together. This is great so far and I shall have to read more tomorrow since my eyes can't stay open anymore. Keep up the great work!
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