| Title: Catspaw
| 06 Apr 2015 9:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I am living this story - but The start of this chapter really threw me off - because Ron and Harry both curse and it seems horribly out of character for them to say 'Christ', 'Mary' and even 'damn'... They are 11, and not muggles... It just pulled me out of the story (enough so to pause and share it with you).
But I LOVE this storyline and Snape!!!
| Title: Catspaw
| 24 Jun 2011 4:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Mikkpisst (Anonymous)
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I think this is an awesome story, i usually don't read a lot of Gen but this is really good! I like how the story has its own spin, its so boring whenever you read an AU story that follows a school year and you have the exact same things happen.
you have the exact right mix of AU and Cannon!
Author's Response: THANK you! You don't know how happy I am to hear you say that. Because I agree, and don't understand why some people review me and complain nonstop about how this didn't happen in the books and neither did this and so on. And I'm like, well we all KNOW what happened in the books, why would you want to read ff where the SAME thing happens? It's already been done, so why reinvent, or write, the wheel? I write these stories so I can have something DIFFERENT happen to the characters, so it makes it fun and interesting to read. So why complain, if you're reading fanfiction that it's not like the book? Just wait till you see what happens next!
I was surprised...thought it'd been Seamus. Anyhow, a minor detail that you may want to consider modifying...Fred can't have taken Arithmancy the year before because he was a third year when the Trio hit first year. Electives begin 3rd year. You might want to change the course mentioned to Charms or Transfiguration...
Author's Response: Thanks, for some reason I thought they were in fourth year, but I miscounted. I did change it to History of Magic. And I'm glad you were surprised.
| Title: Catspaw
| 11 Sep 2008 6:26 am
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| Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous)
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Yes, that was a surprise!
Author's Response: Good, as I'd hoped it would be!
yes suprised would be the word for it! that was compleatly unexpected i never even thought of nevil! great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted it to be different than the original, and poor Neville seemed to fit the bill.
| Title: Catspaw
| 06 Sep 2008 3:50 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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great chapter! I love this story so much! it's very cool! Hope Snape doesn't kill Harry, though!
Author's Response: Thank you! As for Snape killing Harry, you'll see what happens soon!
after all my thoughts on the matter of the accomplice neville was the last person who i would of thought of, so very well done.
hermione is getting suspicious about snapes and harrys relationship, do you like alice in wonderland by any chance?
i hope they get to the stone without to many mishaps, though i expect snape to be on his guard tonight
Author's Response: Oh good, I had hoped I wasn't too obvious, I like to surprise people! yes, hermione is starting to piece together harry and Snape's relationship, she's a clever girl! And I was wondering who would get that reference to Alice in Wonderland. One of my faves, by the way! Snape will be on alert.
| Title: Catspaw
| 05 Sep 2008 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous)
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Loved it, especially the part where Harry tries to convince about Quirrell stealing the Stone and Snape swats him in front of Hermione. I was ROTFLMAO! And I feel really bad for Neville too, getting used that way by Quirrell/Voldemort.
Author's Response: Thanks so glad you like this. I feel bad about Neville but Quirrell is a very evil man.
| Title: Catspaw
| 05 Sep 2008 9:12 pm
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| Reviewer: blackmagicwoman (Anonymous)
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Beautifully done, I really liked how you had Snape come after them and threaten Harry with a detention and poor Neville, I really never suspected him!
Author's Response: Thanks, yes severus was pretty steamed, and as for Neville, he was used and abused, poor kid!
| Title: Catspaw
| 05 Sep 2008 4:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Sonseeahray (Anonymous)
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Well done and I am pretty sure that Hermoine will find the truth behind Severus.
And you should bring it up on fanfiction net.
Author's Response: She's already beginning to suspect the truth between him and Harry. Eventually, I'll get around to posting it on FF.net. Thanks for reviewing!
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