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Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 21 Jun 2011 6:25 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    thank goodness snape noticed the problem before harry collapsed!
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 19 Aug 2009 5:11 pm
Reviewer: monique19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice job i like the story till now it was not easy to begin with becouse there wasn't a good begin sow i had no idea to start.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 14 Mar 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: Maquislady1388 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm only on chapter 3 and already i'm already very confused. I think it's supposed to be the begining of third year but Harry mentions having Remus as a teacher and friend. We know that Remus didn't come to Hogwarts till 3rd year in cannon and Harry had not met his before that. If this is supposed to be an alternate Universe I would suggest getting a good beta who can help you make the details of this A/U a little clearer. I also think the charecters act to mature for their age. if Harry and co. are 13 then Ginny is only 12 and would still be to young to have a steady boyfriend let alone one who is three years older then her.

    Author's Response:

    First, it is stated as AU!

    Second, not only Remus but also Moody are there and it is stated clearly why they are there in the first chapter! I'm very satisfied with my beta and won't take another one. Some people say the characters act to childish and others say they are to mature. I can't make anyone happy. Sorry. At my work I have 12 year old girls who already have babys, not that I think this is good, but I can't see a problem to have Ginny a beginning relationship with Lee. I didn't say that there was more than kissing or holding hands. Thanks for your opinion and I hope my explaination made clear why I won't change something!

Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 12:45 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful 3 chapters! i love where this story is headed. just to clarify...this is set in harry's 3rd year and he killed voldemort in his 2nd year? Snape is also married to a relation of Dumbledores?

    I assume that you arent following the plot of the books as i could find no mentioin of the chamber of secrets but thats cool coz i love an original story.

    I cant wait to read more...

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I realized that some people are confused how old Harry is in my story and in which year he is. But you got it all right. I think I will make it clear in front of the next chapter so that nobody is confused. And you also are right that I don't follow the plot of the books. I tried to get rid of Voldemort as fast as possible because I wanted to concentrate on Harry. I needed him young because otherwise tha adoption wouldn't make much sense. I hope I don't confuse the poeple too much.

    Prof. Dumbledore-Snape is the daughter of Albus and Minerva. This will become clear in later chapters but it didn't hurt to tell you here. :) They also have 5 year old twin boys. Okay I think I gave enough away now. :D

    Thanks a lot for your reply the next chapter will be up soon!

Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this so far. The background story is unique. I cannot wait for more, thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! The next chapter will be up soon. :hug:
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: Cherlindrea34 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Author's Response: Working on giving the background informations is the hardest part of this story. What more background do you think I have to give?"

    For this story you don't need to go into to much detail on the back ground, but perhaps you could do some flash backs with both snape and harry while they are developing there relationship.

    As for the type of back ground, how did voldimort get his body back, how did they find out the hiding places of the other objects and destroy them? Those would be good to know, as in canon he did not get his body back till 4th year and used Harry's blood.

    I really like this story though, just thought I would give you a few things to think on as I always find this helps when writing out a story line.

    Author's Response: Okay, I understand. To be honest, I really hate Voldemort and tried to get rid of him as fast as possible. Therefore the part was only that short. *blush*
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 1:57 am
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this fic. already! It's a great start and I can't wait for more! I hope this story will contiune for a lot longer. I will keep reading, if you keep writing.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The next chapter will be up tomorrow or the day after tomorrow. And I have so many ideas at the moment that I can hardly sort them all. So I have a lot of more stuff to write. Don't worry. :)
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 1:06 am
Reviewer: leeann_pitbull (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! Can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review ! The next chapter will be up tomorrow or the day after tomorrow.
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 12:41 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story I am glad that someone is going to get to the bottom of Harry's Problem. I hope that Severus and his wife take Vernon appart. They both deserve it.

    Author's Response: :D I will think about it! But Snape's wife would not do this because she is much to soft for hurting someone or even screaming on someone. And I fear she will hold Severus back as well. But we will see. ;)
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 27 Dec 2008 9:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    You write very well; I can't believe English is not your first language. What IS your first language, if you don't mind me asking?

    Author's Response: My first language is German. :D Thanks for the review!

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