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Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 25 Aug 2014 8:24 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this but I must say that i'd have loved to read what happened to Severus with healer James
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 16 Apr 2012 4:27 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely so far; however, I'm a little wary of Harry living with Albus and Minerva as well as the Snapes. First it seems unrealistic to me and I'm concerned about whether there will be as many family moments with this new turnout.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 19 Aug 2009 5:49 pm
Reviewer: monique19 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 26 Jan 2009 6:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love it!! I think that Albus shouldn't give so many comments about his daughter though, like, "'Show me one human being that is able of being mad at that girl,' Albus said, chuckling." In my opinion, he would not say that as an answer to a child's question. He would be reassuring and plainly tell him that he is not mad. I think that's all I'd like to comment on in that regard.

    I adore that Harry is going to live with Snape and his wife. I just hope that Snape takes up the majority of the interaction with Harry, and James and Albus would be okay too. I love that the Snape's live with Dumbledore. That's a nice twist! I can't wait to see this new family dynamic. I wonder what kind of trouble Severus got into by developing bronchitis and not telling anyone.

    Thanks for posting this story here!

    Author's Response: I try to balance the interactings between Harry and his new family well. You will see what I mean when I post the chapters, where Harry moves in. Oh and of course Severus will get in trouble for hiding his bronchitis and for not doing what Poppy and James tell him. You will find out soon!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 22 Jan 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter I think Severus Ivy Minerva and Dumbledore is going to have there hands full with a little boy

    Author's Response: Absolutly! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 21 Jan 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was cute. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 20 Jan 2009 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it except I think Harry should call Prof. Dumbledore grandpa instead. It's cuter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Harry will already have problems with calling him Albus. I think 'grandpa' would be a little too much. Maybe later. :)
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 20 Jan 2009 1:35 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love Love Love, Poor Severus Minervia Ivy and Dumbledore. Will have their hands full, once he figures he can be a kid. but that will be good he needs to be a kid.

    Author's Response: Oh yes! :D Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 19 Jan 2009 12:49 am
Reviewer: Quipped to Death (Signed) [Report This]
    It feels a bit awkward hearing Harry call the headmaster by his first name but it's your story and to each his own. Despite that I like where this is going. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    It is awkward for Harry as well and he will need some time to get used to it. But it would be a little difficult to write this story when Harry would call them Prof. ... Just imagine Harry and his new family at the breakfast table and asking "Could you please pass me the marmelade, Professor?" and 4 people trying to grab the marmelade. And writing their full names would be a little tiring for me. So I know it is a little early to let him call them by their first name but I hope you and my other readers will get used to it. Thanks a lot for your review!

Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: Barb (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow!! Please tell me you are going to write more in this series. It's ablsolutely wonderful

    Author's Response: Of course I write more. There are already more chapters written but my beta needs some time. Thanks for the review!

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