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Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 25 Aug 2014 9:16 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love James
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 16 Apr 2012 4:36 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter although I'm a little concerned about Harry having so many adult role model type people because I was sort of hoping for a story biased towards Severus.
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 11 Nov 2009 3:47 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Moody wasn't the DADA professor until fourth year, third year was Remus.

    Author's Response: This story is AU! It was explained in the first two chapter!!! There also was written why and when Remus and Alastor started to work there. Almost nothing in this story is canon compliant.
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 15 May 2009 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Guest (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story and think you've done a great job in a language which isn't your first!

    Thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 26 Jan 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I am really enjoying James as a character. I think that he might be my favorite original character in a long time. I don't really like the scenes with Harry and his friends as much as the scenes with James for some reason. Ivy seems lovely. I just hope that the story remains focused on Harry for awhile. :)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like James because I like him a lot. :)
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 23 Jan 2009 4:29 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i like the pace of this story, some fics i have read are rushed or seem to be, you tell the story in a nice fashion and give alot of details about the characters and everything, so carry on at this nice pace as its a great fic

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad that you like the pace of this story. I was worried because this site is only for people who love Severus and Harry interactions. I felt it was necessary to let Severus out of some chapters to give the other characters a chance to intoduce themselve. Severus is still one of the two mean characters, but I fear that the readers here will be to impatient to wait. :( The next chapter will still be without Severus but than he will be there again for every chapter (as long as I can plan now)! The next chapter is ready to submit but I hold it back because someone already made clear that he/she is waiting for more Snape/Harry interactions. So maybe it is better to wait until I get the chapter, where Severus will appear again, back from my beta, so that I can submit chapter 11 and 12 shortly behind each other. I would hate to get flames for submitting chapters without Professor Snape here and hope that I can avoid it this way.

    I'm very glad about your possitive review. It calmed my nerves a little.

Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 21 Jan 2009 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh My, Harry may think it's funny how Ivy can minipulate Alastor but what will he think when she uses her charms on him....

    Author's Response: He will find out very soon! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 21 Jan 2009 4:32 am
Reviewer: cait- (writeurlife) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    where's the harry/snape interaction?? come on!!!

    Author's Response: Yeah, sorry! There will be still one chapter without him and then he will be in each chapter that will follow! I promise!

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