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Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 16 Apr 2012 5:09 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Does this mean that Minerva and Albus are a couple? Isn't there a huge age gap there?
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 05 Feb 2009 6:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww, Yay! I liked the tour, and all the portraits there. I adore that Snape is thinking of Harry as his son so quickly, even letting it slip that they were a family now. Fabulous.

    I do wish that there were more physical and characteristic descriptions of the twins as they are acting and moving in the scenes. I can't even remember how old or big they are, and I'd like to be able to imagine them and their faces better. They are very entertaining.

    I just bet that Harry will get into trouble with those books!!!

    Great setup, I am enjoying the development and background info.

    Author's Response:

    The twins are 4 (soon to be 5) and look exactly like Snape just younger and cuter. I have a drawing of Eathan on my deviantart page. For the rest you just have to use your imagination. :)

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 04 Feb 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a really good story keep it
    up (write more soon)

    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The next chapter is up now!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was awesome, Severus wants Harry to feel like he's part of the family, I like that. I wonder how Harry knew of that potions master. I hope Harry doesn't get in trouble his first night. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: You will find out why Harry knew him in later chapters! :) Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was really cute

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 4:34 am
Reviewer: Doxie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A very enjoyable story so far -- please keep writing! I am especially looking forward to seeing Harry in his therapy sessions and how he copes with his new situation.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 4:26 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love this chapter! i am so excited to read more and see how harry fits in with his new family. great job, keep up the good work!! =)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like my story. You will see more of the family interaction in the next chapters! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 1:13 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That chapter was beautifully written..I cannot wait for Harry's room..I'm guessing that that's next

    More please xxx

    Author's Response:

    Room? Who said he will get a room; didn't I already mentioned the broom cupboard? No, no, just joking. Of course he will see his room in the next chapter. :) But it also will be a little more drama in the next chapter again!

    Thank you evry much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 01 Feb 2009 9:03 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good....i am really enjoying this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you like my story! 
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 01 Feb 2009 8:41 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    kazam! can't wait to see harry's bedroom. it should be blue. or purple. haha, i read a fanfic where he had a purple room cuz he didn't want to choose house colors. hillarious.

    Author's Response: Next chapter you will see his room. But it won't be blue nor purple. :) Thanks for the review!

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