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Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 22 Jan 2016 6:43 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Hair means your manly. lol.

    My father used to tell me to eat the crust on my bread (I always pealed it off)... He said it would, "put hair on your chest." Yeah. That's what you tell a teenage girl. silly man. I adore him...
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2012 3:22 am
Reviewer: futrmrssnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! My Sev is happy with a family, and Harry gets a loving family. Two thumbs up already. I loved the Shaving discussion. I just saw a pic on deviant Art where Sev was teaching harry how. Very cute. I can't wait to read the rest.
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 01 Jan 2011 12:50 pm
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Teeheehee the shaving part was funny :P

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I just found this story and it's wonderful so far! Please keep up the good work and update soon, I can't wait to meet the new character.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 12:00 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    i absolulty love this story!! its awsum. please update soon

    Author's Response: I'll try my best! Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 6:31 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwww YAY!! I loved this chapter, The twins are adorable, and it was endearing how Eathan worried that his wall had set Harry off. Love the rooms.

    It was so nice to read the family accepting Harry so easily. It was a little odd that Harry referred them as his family so quickly, and even more odd that the said family didn't seem to take note of that in any sort of nonverbal reactions in the narration. But i am glad that Harry is happy here.

    Thanks for the terrific updates!!

    Author's Response:

    In my mind, I had let Harry ponder (or imagine) about Ivy as a mother even before she offered the adoption/guardianship. Therefore it was okay for me that he accepts it so easy, but I can understand that it could seem a little rushed for the readers. Sorry.

    I'm very glad that you like my story. Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 5:41 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey! nice job on this chapter! anxiously waiting for the next.. i love the sev and harry interactions and yours are just a tiny bit more special than others. dont ask me why though.. i cant explain. i just... 'feel'. OH! I LOVE THE TWINS! so cute! Oh. why aren't they like part telepatic? like Gred and Forge? cause.. you know the weasley twins always finish each other's sentences.. i wonder if yours would too... :)

    Hope you update soon!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Maybe I let the Weasley twins teach them something about that, but I think Severus won't be happy about it. :)

     Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 5:22 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was very sweet
    i love dad Sev especially with the shaving bit lol

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it xxxx

    The twins are so warm towards to him xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 2:03 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry doesn't grow up to fast, and I liked that he referred to the twins as his little brothers. I think it will take some time for him to think of the adults as parents and grandparents.

    Author's Response:

    I was a little unsure to let him say this brother thing while they spoke about Hedwig, but I'm relieved that you think it was okay.

    Thank you for your review!


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