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Title: Chapter 18 - James 27 Mar 2011 12:41 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    I find it interesting that Harry is able to let people come close to him or touch him after such abuse, guess his spirit isn't broken. That's good!
    He's also very outspoken. Most abused children are not that outspoken, especially so soon after the abuse and being introduced into new surroundings.
    Nevertheless, great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I have seen a lot of different reactions of abused children and teenager. Some are very clingy others are withdrawn or agrresive to others or themselves. Each child is so different. Still I never attempt to show real life in my stories. I just write them to balance myself out. Therefore Harry has to suffer so much and my adults character always make a lot of mistakes. I'm glad you nevertheless like the story.

     

Title: Chapter 18 - James 05 Mar 2009 8:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, yay. :) Things are looking up for Harry now.

    Be careful to watch the tenses. You seem to want to write in the past tense, but not everything matches right. For example: "Harry didn't knew what to say to all this." It should be "Harry didn't know what to say to all this." Know is present tense because didn't is past tense already and you aren't supposed to have two past tense words in a row.

    Author's Response: I will check it again. The tenses are very hard for me. :(
Title: Chapter 18 - James 25 Feb 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor little Harry he is so confused. with the adults.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 18 - James 24 Feb 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    This is such a nice story. I'm so happy that Harry has people who care so much about him.
    Nice work, and I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 18 - James 23 Feb 2009 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Natasha (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Keep up the good work- this is great chapter. I couldn't tell that your first language isn't English- you're doing fantastic!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 18 - James 23 Feb 2009 8:13 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    It was good that Harry got a lot of his chest xxx

    Beautiful chapter...please add more soon...will this be a HG/HP or a GW/HP(Ginny) or are we just focusing on the new family/guardian thing or do you not want to spoil it??

    Author's Response:

    I'm not sure about the a pairing. Right now Harry has other problems and the story is concentrating on the family. So I haven't thought about it so far, but he will definitely have girlfriend later.

    Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 18 - James 23 Feb 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: shan182 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey.. Another nice chapter added to this fantastic story. :) Love to see more of Sev, the twins. But love reading about Harry growing and changing. dont think Harry expected therapy to be that. :)

    Author's Response: :) Thank you very much for your review!

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