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Reviews For Harry and His New Family
One thing is that is seems everyone was wayyy to harsh with Harry. I mean he is going through so much, especially with these incredibly cumbersome panic attacks, then Draco comes in and says the most hurtful things anyone could hear, Harry tried to do the right thing by using the inhaler and Draco knocked it out of his hand. But, everyone is speaking with Harry as if he lost complete control and just lashed out on Draco. I know you shouldn't hit people who only verbally assault you, but jeez, I think they reacted to harshly for someone as emotionally distraught as Harry. The other thing I wanted to mention was the punishment. The 10 page essay seems unrealistic for a 13 year old. After all, the paper would only be on their actions and what they could do differently. Some full blown research papers are even hard to get to ten pages, and their written by uni. students. Also, I really hope they don't take the weekend trip away from him. I think a week being grounded, deknoming the garden and an extremely long essay is already so much for someone that has been through the ringer like this. I know this review is super long, but I just wanted to say what I felt ^ up there. I really am liking this story and i'm glad there are so many chapters! I shouldn't finish for days! So I can be lazy for the next week or two and just read XD loool I haven't checked to see if you've wrote anymore stories, but I shall when I finish this one. You're a great writer! Author's Response: All the adults are pedagogues and at least here they always feel the need to teach children that violence never is a solution for problems. I don't think they could have stopped themself. Even so Harry had been through a lot he needs rules and especially has to learn that hurting someone else isn't accepted. Yes, I see your point about the pages. I will change it. Three then? Or still too much? Yes, I have written much more stories and on ff.net are even more. To this story here already is a sequel up. :) Thank you for yourlong and detailed review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I can't wait to see how Draco and Harry will work together during their punishment! I'm looking forward to the next update. I hope that Harry can still go to Hogsmeade. Author's Response: Well, Albus is very nagry. Maybe Severus and Ivy can convince him and Minerva to still go to Hogsmeade with the boys. :) Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Albus is very angry, but Severus and Ivy will convince Albus and Minerva to still go with Harry and the twins. So you will read about the Hogsmeade visit soon. Thank you very much for your review!
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Author's Response: Maybe they will only have small pages to fill. :) Thank you for your review!
I loved this chapter and cannot wait to read more from you soon xx Author's Response: As always, I'm very glad you liked it and reviewed! |
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