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Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 27 Mar 2011 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, is Hagrid still the same in this universe you have created? I'm not used to this Hagrid, he seems too serioussss. lol.
    I'm still a bit peeved at their ridiculous punishment.
    10 page essay...ugh.
    The grounding, a whole week without being able to visit with his friends. Wit all the stuff he's going through, this is the time where he needs his friends the most.
    Not trying to get all sentimental over a fictitious story, but i've been through something like Harry and it just seems too harsh a punishment for something as small as not knowing how to control your anger issues. Grown ups should already know that abused children need to be put in anger management right away, as well as therapy to increase their self esteem.Also Albus needs to give it a rest and learn to relax...such a meanie!
    Ok, ok , ok, I will try not to mention how unnerved I am by their punishment anymore (try). lol
    either way, still a great story. I really want to deknome a garden now lol. I'm glad Draco and Harry are getting along better, but I don't quite understand the thing with Lucius. Was he a Death Eater?
    Great chapter, on to the next!

    Author's Response:

    I so suck in writing Hagrid. Not that I can't even write his language as English isn't my mother tongue but I even have problems with his character.

    The same goes for Ron and Hermione. That's the reason why they show up so seldom. :(

    Yes, I shocked a few people with Dumbledore here. He was 'a bit' out of character. :)

    Lucius was a Death Eater and spy like Severus and was killed before his name was cleared to the public.

    Thank you for the review! I really like your detailed comments. 

Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 02 Aug 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm back! And you have written so many chapters while I was gone! I'm going to have so much fun reading these!

    Author's Response: :D Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 07 Jul 2009 2:02 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter they are learning to get a long a little. Poor Harry will get a new trial with going to lunch with Severus

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 06 Jul 2009 9:50 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chaptrer.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 06 Jul 2009 12:43 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Your Hagrid is more sophisticated than the canon one. ("I will inform the Professor that you served your detention well.") I think I like it, his jargon was hard to read for me :)
    I am looking forward to reading next chapter - with Snape in it :)
    Mila

    Author's Response: As English isn't my first tongue I have problems to write Hagrid's jargon and so I didn't even tried it. I'm glad you like it! The next chapter is already at my beta!
Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 05 Jul 2009 3:46 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder who is stealing Narcissa...more soon please xx

    Author's Response: You will find out in the next chapter! It's already at my beta! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 34 – Becoming friends? 04 Jul 2009 9:30 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was really cute. I think that with time, those two boys can come to an understanding.

    Osy, too adorable. I just love those little twins!

    Please update soon. I am really curious who Draco thinks is stealing his mother. I hope that he confides in Severus.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Draco and Harry will realize that they aren't so different.

    I really like the twins, too. They are so cute.

    You will find out more about the one 'stealing' Draco's mother in the next chapter! Its already at my beta!

    Thank you very much for your review! 


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