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Reviews For The Task
You really need to work on your characterization! Snape was completely out of character! Yes, he would hate to check on Harry Potter the way the headmaster asked him too, especially year after year, but he would not tell the headmaster yes and then not do it. He has more honor than that. A nice idea, but a very poorly executed fic. 1 frog.
Snape's remorse at discovering how Harry has been treated by the Durley's is a pretty common theme here, but I think there's a reason for that. We all want to think that Snape has redeeming virtues, and that if he really knew the truth, he wouldn't be such a jerk. I personally would love to see evidence of this in canon, but I think because its all from Harry's point of view it will never happen. And that's why I come here. :-) Nice story.
aww.... it started out funny.. then became sad... really sad... =( good job writing! ~Miz_kriss
Awesome story. :) Nice angst. And it's so plausible to be canon. I really like this story. Ah, just so you know, I think I accidently deleted this story that you posted, I was sure that I hit the Validation button but the story was gone so I had to go Fanfiction.net and steal and post the story from there. That's what this one is. XD I hope that I didn't miss too many things, can you check it? : Sorry about that. It's probably a bug. Author's Response: Thankies :D It's not a problem (bout the FFnet thing). I think the only thing that was different between the two was that I fixed the line breaks for over here.. but that's not a big deal at all.
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