Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 26 - Ready, Go! 27 Nov 2023 1:13 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    Do I want to know how this is going to end? I highly doubt it. Harry and Draco gaetting together to cause mischief... definitely gonna end up with their rear end red and burnt. lol

Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light 27 Nov 2023 12:15 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    Finally both boys called a truce. I hope it lasts throughout Hogwarts. 

Title: Chapter 23 - Two Boys 26 Nov 2023 4:21 pm
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    I like where this is going between Harry and Draco. Hopefully they will start being cordial towards one another if not friends. But I do want them to become friends. Loving the story. Great read!

Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 26 Nov 2023 3:49 pm
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    This is going to be quite interesting. Draco and Harry... Poor Snape. I have a strong feeling both wil get spanked out of their minds. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. 

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 26 Nov 2023 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    OMG!!! I belive I was embarrassed for Harry when he got spanked in front of Neville. I felt as if I was standing there while he was getting spanked. 

     

    Harry should be in Hufflepuff as much as he cries. I thought he was going through a phase of grievance and everything was bottled up and needed to be released but c'mon Harry get a grip on yourself. 

Title: Chapter 12 - Banter 26 Nov 2023 2:38 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    Finally some decent interaction between the two without them biting each other's heads off. I hope Harry can behave more in the future but very unlikely.... which I'm dreading. Hopefully Snape and Harry can come to an understanding and learn to respect each other. 

Title: Chapter 11 - Weeding through the Past 26 Nov 2023 12:37 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    I was hoping to see a bond forming between Harry and Snape by now. But they keeping running around in circles. I was really hoping that Snape would have acknowledged Harry's mistreatment at the Dursley but he disregarded the whole thing as if it was nothing. I'm looking forward to them bonding... really bonding and seeing each other as they are meant to be seen. 

Title: Chapter 5 - You're on Fire 25 Nov 2023 4:08 pm
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    If Harry keeps behaving the way he is, I wonder how Snape is going to get to know him. I hope it was the curse that was causing that behavior. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Great reading.

Title: Chapter 3 - Getting Warmer 25 Nov 2023 11:59 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    Harry seems to be way out of character... he id behaving oddly ungratful, arrogant and Malfoyish. Did you intend him to be OOC or does it have something to do with his fever that Snape is concerned about? I hope I'm not coming of as critiquing your work, I'm just trying to understand his behavior. I love your work, very nicely written.  

Title: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away 25 Nov 2023 3:39 am
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    I'm liking this story and how it's written. I love the little bit of humor in the beginning of the second last paragraph. I hope to see a lot more of this humor in the rest of the story. Indeed very well written. Thank you for writing. 


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