Please make a sequal! i love this story!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Discussion on Disobedience
| 05 Sep 2007 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: ummmm (Anonymous)
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I'm not sure who is more the child...
Wow! This story took me four days to read... Well I do have two jobs... but... this story was an encredible ride!! I would love a sequil! PLEASE!!
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 06 Aug 2007 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: LovelyLena (Anonymous)
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I really don't have much time, but I just read this story straight through for the second time, and I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it. You write pretty well, and the grammar isn't too bad (although you could clean it up a little). The characters don't really seem like canon characters, but I love them anyway, and your plot was good. Thanks for writing a great story and look forward to a long review from me soon. =)
| Title: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away
| 31 Jul 2007 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: JM (Anonymous)
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I really liked the part where Harry fell in over the fire!
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 28 Jul 2007 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: Katrina (Anonymous)
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i absolutely loved this story, I thought I would be uncomfortable with corporal punishment but it was not too severe and there were several parts of the story that had me laughing out loud.. I was ON FIRE!! LOL
| Title: Chapter 1 - Floo Me Away
| 17 Jul 2007 11:40 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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"...maybe Snape would blink, and Harry could wrap the cape over himself real quick, and Snape would just think he was having a hallucination from teaching dunderheads for so many years."
How amusingly clever! I love your Harry in this so much.
| Title: Chapter 7 - Discussion on Disobedience
| 15 Jul 2007 4:24 am
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| Reviewer: Delaine (Anonymous)
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I was just rereading a bit of your story. I am really looking forward to more of TPL, and rereading to tide me over. Did you realize Snape gave Harry two watches in this fic?
| Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light
| 12 Jul 2007 11:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Ebbtide (Signed)
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“Tink Ah wash an inbalid, da way oo fush ober be,” Harry said around the thermometer.
lol. That has to be my favorite line in this chapter. I love how Harry just shrugs stuff off when it has to do with his physical well being, but if it's personal and emotional then he is just SO touchy. lol. Love that kid. You did a great job on this story! You are fantastic!!!
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 08 Apr 2007 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous)
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