| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 27 Feb 2007 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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I love this story!!!
I didn't expect Snape to adopt Harry...
I can't wait to read more!!!
Having Snape realize that Harry needed training in money was an excellent way of showing the transition from discipline to training for Harry.
While I love the discussion with Snape and Harry, for some reason it felt rushed. I can't exactly put my finger on why. I know that by now Harry would want this, but I guess it might have been good to show him actually thinking beforehand about how things would change back at Hogwarts and realizing he wasn't too happy about that.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 6:55 pm
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| Reviewer: aslade (Anonymous)
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Well I´m very sad to know that it will be only one more chapter. This story has been great and I have to admit that I love the long stories more. It would be great if this story will have a sequel, and see how this pair continue with their relacionship in Howards.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: C. (Anonymous)
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I really love this story and hope you write a sequel. I can't belive it has been a year, thanks for the great story.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 5:42 pm
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| Reviewer: gem (Anonymous)
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wow, this is great i think you should do a sequel of how they got in hogwarts...
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 5:21 pm
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| Reviewer: youngwriders (Anonymous)
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Congratulations. I enjoyed your story, and loved this chapter. You have to do a sequel, if for no other reason than it would be fun to see Harry get a good paddling at school. I bet there are rulers for measuring in the potions classroom or his school office. Unless you could work it in next chapter. Goofing off on the train maybe? And Snape finds out and spanks him before the welcome feast... ? I know, I ask for a lot. I have so enjoyed your story. Thanks much for writing it. Its been fun to read and I look forward to what you do next. A sequel or something else brilliant. Good job.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 3:42 pm
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| Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous)
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i simply love your story
it is amazing how you can write such a fantastic story!!!!
you are doing a great job,
please update soon cant wait to read more of it
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 2:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Emilia (Anonymous)
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Again, great chapter. Although I was a bit relieved Draco left. I´d love a sequel!!
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 12:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Adams Sunshine (Anonymous)
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Oh wow, Perry that was awesome, I so want more! Please write more soon.
| Title: Chapter 28 - New Negotiations
| 26 Feb 2007 7:33 am
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| Reviewer: Hilari (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter. Truly wonderful. I am so glad that you are sharing this with us. I know you said that there is only one more chapter...could you do a sequel. Please Please Please. :)
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